Thank you for your patience. The update is finally here! I have done my best to proofread, but there might still be errors in both codes and the prose, please feel free to point those out. I am extremely grateful for the support, and ask me anything you wish to with regards to the game. Also, as a bonus, here’s the rendered version of Flavia and “a” Twilight.
Update Notes
-I would suggest starting from the Prologue as I have made some changes there
-Changes were also made to Chapter 1
-Added Chapter 2 and parts of Chapter 3
-Changed some details about the setting
-Chapter 3 has two distinct paths depending on your choices in Chapter 2
-Overhauled Character Creation
-Added Stat System (Will fine tune it further)
-Added the option to skip chapters. But I will still suggest starting from the Prologue even if you have played it earlier.
-I has been genderlocked to female and will be referred to as Isabel henceforth. I made the choice to do so because it was getting hard to write her related plots.
-Added a new male RO. Details about him will be revealed later, there is a chance you will run into him.
-Added glossary of terms
Looking for feedback on:
-Prose flow, grammar, readability, etc. There might be errors because there’s a chance I have missed some branches.
-Coding.
-Anything else.
There are some mistakes in Yuri pronouns? I don’t know if that’s a thing you are also looking for reports on
its at the very begining of chapter 2 (for some reason i cant attach a screenshot)
also in the scene with the Princess is the non romance route (the yank hand away) written? bc it gives me an error
“chapter_1 line 1790: bad label amelia_non_romance_route_1”
oh also:
lykon_at_beacon_heights line 86: bad label yuna_friend
Something I was wondering about is, what are the naming conventions in gralea like? So far the only person we’ve actually met from there is our superior.
Something Id say though that there are a few stats you could probably merge because right now there are alot of them. (For example merging dexterity and agility, as well as maybe merging strength and constitution into something like brawn)
Using “with a visible frown” after deciding that MC finds F charming seems a bit odd to me, is that maybe the followup for choosing that MC finds them annoying?
@Silverpin Sort of Eastern and Central European I suppose. Except for Twilight. The stat thing did occur to me. However, if I were to merge Agility with Dexterity and Strength with Constitution, agile characters will be reduced to only using ranged weapons and same with strong characters and melee weapons.
@Frieza Some shitty things happened to her. You might have already met the responsible party/parties. XD
@yb_minhee Non romance route with Amelia should be available.
