Random spelling and other errors I caught
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1.He (still) has the manners of a noble.
I added the still because he isn’t really a noble now- so the still would be to signify that he has kept those manners.
2. Though his voice isn’t that loud, the way he harshly stood up and knocked off his chair and (how) he slammed his hands on the table is eye-catching enough.
(Also- you used “the way” twice in the original- so i changed it into how. )
Lucian
And my opinion of the ROs- just my thoughts on the matter, but in the end, it’s the author’s choice.
I’m not opposed to gender-locked romances, but whenever I like an RO, but their sexuality is of the another gender (or they’re of another gender), I get slightly put off. I may like this character, but it’s female (just an example), and/or likes (Ex.males) only, I would be discouraged and have to look for another character- or in some VERY rare cases, go look for another game.
I’ve never done coding, but I think that without gender lock, it’d be easier- you won’t have to put in variables and whatnot to make sure only the right gender/orientation gets those scenes. (it prbs not this easy, but I think???lol) you can just change the pronouns (and body parts, if necessary)