@LauraSikdar It’s good to be back I was away for longer than planned, but things should pick up from here. Welcome back to you too!@VainCorsair and you have both been a great help with my lovely typos/weird sentences, so I am lucky to have you
Ten gives his stamp of approval. 10/10.
Thanks! I am still not 100 % satisfied with what I have right now, but I am already working on the next chapter.
Free time activities are always the most fun Though, the Society isn’t really familiar with the concept of free time or hobbies, so expect a lot of these choices to be connected to training. Or something else entirely
@Avid_reader Thank you! Comments like this put wind in my sails.
Don’t mention it. I was a fan of this story and your writing when it was in its barebones stage, and it has improved by leaps and bounds these last few months. Keep it up!
Hi! Just stopping by to say I’ve been doing some rewriting of the story (got stuck at the free time part, unfortunately). Hopefully, I will have something to show soon.
Just a little heads up: I have also created Raven’s Flight that takes place in the same world as Hunter’s Sacrifice. Raven’s Flight is basically a parallel story with a different protagonist (and chain of events).
Yooooo! I’ve still got midterms so I won’t be able to check your new WIP tonight but I WILL check it out as soon as I can ahhhh I’m so hyped!! Sending good luck your way, I hope the rewrite smooths out as you go along and you overcome whatever’s giving you a hard time!
I am mid-ranged fighter equipped with a trident since no one else on the team had one I wanted to be different lol my guy has a slight anger issue, but he loves his team.
. I like how you gave us choices on what type of leader we can be and how deep our team is. Seeing all the cast of characters interact with each other while you just sit there an observe and intervene when needed like a parent is interesting
Sidenote: One thing I didn’t like was the choice of which direction to head to when the prowlers come. Like it didn’t matter what you choose the resulted were the same…which was discouraging
awRIP FOUR they were my favorite…n last thing i swear… will we get to fight our vice commander or at least some prowlers Im really itching to fight something?
Yeah, I will definitely miss writing Four too. He brings much needed cheer into the serious efficiency that is team Alpha. In fact, I am considering squeezing a couple (skipable) flashbacks just to allow players to interact with him more.
Yes! Probably in the next update, either during the training or the new mission. Just don’t expect that victory will be easy, since both Twelve and Prowlers are hard to beat.
And feel free so ask as many questions as possible, since I love answering them
Loved the short Halloween story. Also love the characters, world, and story-line you created! Can’t wait for more!
Also, you should consider making a tumblr or some form of social media blog for Hunter’s Sacrifice and Raven’s Flight! I would definitely follow it and make some fanart
Thank you for your kind words, they warmed my heart I’ve considered making a tumblr before, but wasn’t sure, if there was enough interest for it at this stage.
Admittedly, this
makes me want to do it, just to see your art.
I would need to do some sort of plan first, though. What kind of content would you be interested in?
(By the way, the love triangle achievement??? I had a blast with that scene oh my gosh, it was so fun seeing Seven and Six flustered!!! I could just imagine my captain shaking her head in exasperation and resignation lol)
I haven’t marked the few typos, but would you like me to send those too?
If I may? I currently don’t have any new ideas at the moment, but I do follow a lot several of the WIPs on Tumblr, and I can suggest activities that they have on their blogs?
Aaaa, I am happy you enjoyed it! Truthfully, I was trying to squeeze in a few romantic moments, but the characters had their way with the plot, so the story ended up being a bit more humorous than expected.
Yes, please! As you have surely noticed, I am terrible at proofreading my work.
I was away for longer than planned, but things should pick up from here. Welcome back to you too! @VainCorsair and you have both been a great help with my lovely typos/weird sentences, so I am lucky to have you 
I could just imagine my captain shaking her head in exasperation and resignation lol)