Hueyyad (A WIP PMC/Soldier sim)

Your short words already have a big impact on me and the story. I’m not a native English speaker, but because of your criticism and suggestion now my English is improving. :partying_face:

If there’s something you can tell me to improve the structure, please tell me.

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It’s very difficult to explain. You might want to try and get some sort of editor to look over the final product.

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