Good morning everyone. I need help big time. I am trying to write a game.but even my first interaction of a few character’s with MC goes over like 40000 to 50000 words. Bigger issue is it doesn’t has much choice. Some parts are like i feel where i am living there .they go on and on.i could write 100000 words on a chapter but without any good wording. JUST natural conversation. Rest of game i feel like i have to push to get at certain points.
My biggest issue is how to shorten then interaction and how to add choices in there while interacting.it is like my real life i guess. To most people i rather not talk at all. While a selected few i keep on talking. Yet i can not use any good stylish wording.
Any suggestion please. I badly need it.i have whole story in my mind.little bit of story is my real life actually. Just turned in different type of.but story doesn’t has much choice .it’s like reading a book then a choice game.
Mc is a young child as character’s first meet.so mc asks them about certain things or i am stuck at or i can not think how to add more options,choices,spiceing it up.
Reader’s will definitely not like it if first 40000 words do not have much choices.i personally wouldn’t. Who would stay to read so long.whole book first part is easily 400000 to 600000 with bit different side stories. Even after 300000 to 400000 words in each story .THE actual chapter’s are no more then 15 to 20. By chapter i mean different things happening in life. I am sure for such long one you guys would have maybe 40 or more different things that mc does or happens around.
Basically too much of interaction just like this post.how do i shorten it.