Wonderful story with so many amazing characters and the love interests mwah chef’s kiss 
So, do we meet Poldi in the future again? And the bracelet…could it be that we are really the last of House Seti? I’m looking forward to the next update 
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The new demo update is up! Let me know if y’all run into any problems and hope y’all enjoy!
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Woah, I don’t know how I missed those and I was so excited thinking I got them all. Thanks for letting me know!
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Okay, should be fixed now!
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THANK YOU!! 
love the story
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Poor mc…having to fake being a “noble” feels rather like a betrayal of everything his old teacher taught him. After all knowledge does not care about station or rank. Hopefully the whole “noble” thing is only temporary.
My mc would be of two minds on that, on the one hand, he’d give almost anything to see big brother (or at least the closest thing he ever had to one) again on the other one seeing him as he is now my mc fears that Poldi and teacher would be ashamed and embarrassed by what he has become.
So what? The name means nothing to my mc, less than that even. The temporary resurrection of that bit of dead history is only in service of the latest con of his thieves guild and my mc can’t wait to ditch it again. And even then the only reason it was necessary at all was because Lady Y panicked and said something stupid when “interrogated” by the queen. If she’d just said she knew nothing about us the “noble” charade would not have been necessary. Although given the reaction of the queen it seems we’ll have no choice but look into it more, but to my mc it will never mean more than any other piece of history.
Too bad the cute cat-loving twin is not an RO? He’s such a sweet boy. 
Ah, well going to go for the seer as my mc is not into women or nobles and that Sutek kid literally wants him dead.
By the way is the seer kid another mage?
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Here’s a little writing mistake:
…we needed to hurry, but why?" Your eyes dart around, "And where is everyone? Where–where is Subira…
Another little mistake:
When Tamu and MC go to the temple:
You try to thing back to your time as a locust… it should mean think not thing
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@LeoneWrites was playing the demo again and noticed something and i dont recall if it was like that before. It seems like there is part of the story missing when doing the silken sands path after being a talon for a while. It doesnt transition smoothly from working the place after the general and soldiers leave. An back to amatus office in the talon guild hall later that night might have been other small things leading up to that point but will continue to play lol looking forward to reaching the new parts.
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I haven’t checked the latest update, but is it normal or is it only for me that I have to start the demo from the beginning even after saving my progress the last time I played?
People were having issues with moody and saves, so I updated the link to use Dashingdon again. Hopefully this causes fewer issues!
Thanks a ton!! Also, after thoroughly reading it I am amazed by your skill as a writer. Best of luck for future updates
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The code is wonky at times sometimes it cant be helped when certain things are changed it can happen to any wip. Sometimes not even because of the author but other things can affect it out of the control.
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Saves on a game that is actively being updated are bound to be unstable.
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If new variables are added to a stories earlier chapters that get checked later on in the story, it’s common to have to restart the game from the beginning, lest the game breaketh
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People were having issues with moody and saves, so I updated the link to use Dashingdon again. Hopefully this causes fewer issues!
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Very good game. Great writing and pace. Um, not sure if this is intentional but theres tons of weird characters that pop up in the story.
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I finally got to read the next part of your demo.And I was very interested in seeing how it played out
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Uncaught Quota Exceeded Error: Failed to set a named property ‘save_slot_honora mongstthieveshat_savemod_data_1’ on ‘Storage’: Setting the value of ‘save_slot_h onoramongstthieveshat_savemod_data_1’ exceeded the quota.
This pops up when I try to save. Can someone please tell me how to fix this I can’t save and it’s not just this story either. It’s almost every story on dashingdon.
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Hmm sounds like a dashingdon issue itself which if it is then there is nothing you can do personally if what im thinking is correct.
I have a short update for the demo! I’ll probably update it in a few weeks, but for now, I hope you like this tidbit. (I call it short, but it didn’t feel short to write. It was honestly confusing to write, but anyway, that has to do with branching stuff.)
Hope y’all are doing alright so far this week!
Let me know if it breaks and I hope y’all enjoy!
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