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That, was beautiful…we will watch your career with great interest lololol
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I had a lot of fun playing this can’t wait for future updates lol.
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Thank you so much and haha, watching my career sounds so formal and fancy!
@Suryaansh_mokta I’m so glad you had fun playing and I’m excited to update it this month!
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I’m so excited I can’t wait for this it probably gonna be one of the ones I replay about 6 time just too se everything 
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Digging around on DashingDon and found this. There’s a few minor typos here and there, but nothing that jarring or annoying.
That aside, I had a pretty good time though! I was a bit disappointed the demo ended so early, but well, it is a WIP and all.
It was interesting to play a story here that has some pretty decent character customization. How much it might matter, or if its just flavor… well, either way, it is nice. There’s some few games that let you make a heavily scarred female character! (Or character in general)
It also made me remember back in the day when I learned what ‘voluptuous’ build meant. Though, I did always get conflicting ones on that sometimes, and later learned to just settle for ‘buxom’… not that it is an option here.
Quite curious to see where this goes, especially as the demo ends just when you get past the fun of character creation and stuff! Gotta meet all these other ROs still!
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Thank you for playing! I’m still working on catching some typos, so I’m glad they didn’t mess up the experience for you. Oooo, I totally forgot about buxom! I’ll add that as an option and don’t worry, the ROs are coming!
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Always time to clean up those typos! Thanks for taking the time to read my silly little comments!
I’m actually surprised how few stories tend to let you define the build of your character, come to think of it. It’s probably my own tastes talking, but I do sometimes think a lot of stories tend to take into account situations that a buxom girl might have to deal with.
Not talking in like, ‘bad’ ways. But squeezing into places or whatever. Then again, I freely admit, its just my own interests talking here.
Looking forward to it! The character generation was pretty fun, so time to get to really know the characters and our goals!
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I really liked the demo so far! I think the pacing is excellent. You’re thrown right into the middle of action and it really helps hook the reader in. I think the worldbuilding has been good as well, no overwhelming infodumping while still introducing the characters and setting well. This is random, but I quite like the character creation. It was cool for it to be a drawing of MC and have details like the “gentleness of your eyes” etc. Looking forward to whenever you update next! 
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I haven’t played it yet, but I gotta say that’s one unfortunate name for readers who speak Polish 
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Thank you so much for reading it and your kind words! I tried to keep the character creation engaging and I tried not to go overboard with the world building too soon, so I’m glad you liked both!
@Mango_Pirate 
Yeah I found that out the hard way, but I’m glad it’s giving the Polish readers a nice laugh!
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Well, that aside - the demo is great! Very well written and I’m looking forward to the update.
I loved all surrogates though choosing the scholar led to some… angry gremlin results.
I took a look at your blog and I see Podl has a following - my feelings are: give him a smack than hug him. Give him a double smack on scholar route
I grew attached to Amatus too but something tells me I shouldn’t (I don’t know you tell me 
), he felt relatable even this early on, you did good job hinting at his inner turmoil.
As for the little band of misfits I don’t trust you I sense the potential for tragedy. They’re all very loveable, esp Desma 
The mood was the right amount of angst and cuddles. If I can suggest something - when it comes to choosing an outfit can we get a preview? I was shocked when “well dressed” turn out to mean “you walk around in gold through slums” that’s bold hah.
The only technical problem I encountered - all saves I made so far were broken. It really makes me nervous to use the save system 
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I think I’m staying on my Path of Revenge in the story and after it’s over I am going to stay as a Thief in this beautiful Guild after all it’s family
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@LeoneWrites Is this a bug?
Story location: Leaving the market after someone called Amatus shows up and shoves my food down a tankard. Locusts steal my coin.
My choices: I told the guards and vendors to let them go.
I don’t really understand why I would still be chasing after the locusts if I let them go, so I am assuming this is a bug of sorts? The scene that follows, where Poldi suddenly shows up, is also a little confusing from where I am coming from.
Awesome demo so far though!
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Thank you for playing! In that scene, if you tell people to let the twins go, then Desma chases them and pulls you along with her. Then Poldi finds you later on. I think I’ll rewrite the scene for the sake of clarity. Thank you for bringing it to my attention and I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Wait… what point do we meet the ROs or has that not been implemented yet?
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Thank you so much for playing and I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’m so happy they came across as lovable! I don’t know why you’re worried about Amatus and your friends
I don’t know what’s going on with the save files, but I’ll definitely check on that when I pop in there to fix some things today! Thank you for letting me know!
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You’ll meet the ROs in the next update, although you’ve already met Desma and she is a RO
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Name my character after my favorite Character Hassan The old man of the mountain
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LOVED the WIP really hit me in the feels and made me want to keep on reading
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