Hello everybody,
I moved Hong Kong Blood Opera to a Closed Beta a few months ago. I’ve been very quiet on the forums but I’ve been a busy bee working on this game.
Hong Kong Blood Opera has gone through a major rewrite. I’m making a demo of the first four chapters public again to get some feedback. If you’ve played the game before you’ll notice that a lot has changed.
I’m not interested in line editing (grammar or spelling) feedback at this stage. I’m looking for feedback on:
Pacing: Is there a scene that feels rushed. Is there a scene that drags on too long.
Characters: Do you have a favourite character? Let me know who. Is there a character that bores the crap out of you, let me know.
Story: Does it grab you?
https://dashingdon.com/play/jollyspaniard/hkbo-closed-beta/mygame/