I really like it so far, and I definitely look forward to more when it comes, but I must ask; how did Amun strangle the Main Character if the Main Character had the shackle around their neck? Wouldn’t that make it difficult for Amun to accomplish?
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I love the story it is good read
Interesting demo, can’t wait to learn more about the stranger in the dream.
Keep it up! 
Oh man. I changed the location of the manacles to around the MC’s ankles in my head, but forgot to rewrite it. 
I’ll fix that!
Never mind about moving the manacles, this is actually what happened. How did you know?
Again, thanks to everyone who’s responded! I really didn’t expect anyone to like this demo so I’ve been pleasantly surprised. 
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Forgot to answer this. Yes, this is a faerie game. I’ll update the description soon to make that clear. I have so many versions of this plot that I kind of stayed vague when I was writing the main post.
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I liked it 
Good job!
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