High School Revenge (WIP) (Chapter 4 OUT, +182k words, Nov 30, 2025)

@Sucof are you able to tell at what stage you roughly are in terms of completing the game ?

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Well, agree to disagree. Dylan called the (past) MC a “loser” when my MC tried to get to know him better. I’ve no sympathy whatsoever for him (and pretty much all other targets).

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Speak your truth, brother. I’m not opposed to the idea of forgiveness after I’ve paid them back tenfold, but they’re all pretty goddamn pathetic. Some more than others, and Dylan most of all. We’ll learn what happened and all that, but it doesn’t change the fact that he sold us up the river for whatever dirt Isaac had on him. Olivia taking his side over ours is just the icing on the white dogshit they made us eat.

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I said “some” not “all”. Dylan not falling in that category isn’t really a reason to disagree, imo. But of course, if you believe that literally none of them have any redeeming qualities whatsoever, that’s fine.

(also, Dylan was shown as someone who’d be trying to put himself over MC and the MC in the role of his follower from the moment you met him, all those years ago. If this attitude of his comes to you as surprise… well)

(also also, i think you’re focusing too much on the “loser” thing and to the point of ignoring the sentiment/context of the scene. While Dylan might consider himself the better crop, he’s pretty clearly torn and guilty about what happened to the MC)

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I think it’s because, that yes, from an outside perspective they’re all redeemable to different degrees, but majority if not most of them don’t show much remorse or regret over it, with ungodly levels of delusion and lack of self awareness for the things that they do even in the present

There’s a case to be made for Dylan, but he also only shows any signs when actually confronted with the fact that the “creep” might be back for revenge by the prank we play on him

Otherwise it’s life as usual for all of them, having forgotten the people’s life they ruin, trying to twist their actions as deserved for the victims instead, or something they’re not culpable for

It’s the classic angle of “The axe forgets, but the victim remembers”

From a role play perspective it makes sense to give everyone a second chance, depending on where you draw the line

For some that line is more stretched than others, for others it is pretty short

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That’s… not really true, imo. He’s pretty shaken up when he talks about his “old loser friend” if you go in the maze at Michael’s party with him. This is long before any sort of a hint of the Creep happens, so this is 100% Dylan getting a self-induced guilt trip. Something that’s definitely not a behavior of someone who all but forget and never thinks any of it.

I choose to view it more as his mental guard slipping down because of alcohol/drugs i.e. a common trope for authors to show the “real character”, but fair enough. You can certainly downplay it and retain the (overly, imo) unfavorable view of the guy.

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If i remember correctly he was smoking green, so again

Nott exactly a self induced guilt trip, more of a result of his… choice of vices

More accurately, He was shaken because he was high

Yeah, you can look at it like that, but i personally find the trope to be too shallow for a confession or reveal of any sort

Sort of just states, that the character can’t confront the facts sober, which is the main point of remorse

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This is the part where I bring up that the author confirmed on tumblr that if The Incident resulted in the MC being seriously injured, crippled, or even killed from suicide, literally none of the targets would actually give a shit

Yes that includes your childhood friends

bruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

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Uhm, would you happen to have a link to that confirmation? Because the author’s tumblr linked in the OP seems to have total of three posts and none of them say such a thing…?

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Angela is an angel

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Here’s the post that the author made:

Not even Haley? I don’t know she seems pretty scary and I wouldn’t be surprised if her reason for the incident was because she was angry that mc had a crush on Cecily or something similar. Idk she just doesn’t seem like the type that enjoys sadistic bullying her character feels far more complex then all the others.

Yes I wanna find out answers with Olivia and Dylan but Haley is another matter entirely, kinda similiar to Vallen from Golden Rose.

Dang the Author is doing a phenomenal job with this game :violin::sneezing_face:

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Haley is like Cecily 2.0, but only half the time, so she creeps me out

And she gives me way too many red flags, i’m less prone to chase red flags than most people, so that’s probably my main reasoning for not choosing any of the main cast as RO

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I like chasing Haley bcz her character seems more mysterious, def alot more curious about her then the main cast.
Everyone else is just an open book at this point.

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Thank you for the link; the OP has different tumblr plugged in for some reason, not the one for the game. So i didn’t even know about this one. :v

edit: although, that post specifically mentions “To tell you the truth, I think the only ones who would act a lot different would be Dylan and Olivia. And Dylan more than Olivia.” So the claim that “none of the targets would give a shit, including your old friends”, it seems to be very much not the case, as the friends would allegedly give at least some level of shit.

I don’t understand what you mean by this. What “too little”? The post from the author explicitly states that your friend behavior would be affected by such thing a lot. Not little.

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Exactly lol

I think in the context of actually hurting, or pushing someone into self harm, or deathly territories, too little is actually too little

You have to be having some screws loose to let that slide

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Thats reality, in a car crash your friends are more likely to take videos and pictures rather then help you. Its the world we live in now

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You alright, bruv? That sounded a little too sad XD

The comment did say, that at the end, there wouldn’t be not a lot of change in their horrible behaviour

Which to me sounded like, they’d feel bad at once, then move on to same behaviour, as they did in the current story

But you can take that as you like, i don’t have a good perception of the main cast to see them being introspective

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I believe you misunderstand the comment. The part about no change in behavior was for the characters other than MC’s old friends who were named as ones whose behavior would change by a lot. The tl;dr of it is something like:

  • your friends: behavior changed by a lot
  • Isaac, possibly getting even worse
  • the rest of them, no real change
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