Yeha that’s what I meant as in a choice haha but I’m more into no muscles on me kek
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Note that “Adonis body type” wouldn’t be really something like ridiculous muscle mountain out of a comic book. If anything, it’d be the “pretty boy”.
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Update
Hello, my fellow plotters! Today is the day that many will finally play chapter 4! In its unfinished state… But still better than nothing, I say! Starting today, I will start doing two separate sections for the updates. One will be for what people are getting in the demo, so they know what’s new, and one will be for what I’ve actually written this week, since I’ll be further down the story than what you’re seeing.
So, let’s first start with what you’re getting this week: chapter 4. Some parts of it anyway. You’ll see for yourselves what’s new there haha.
The other new things to the older chapters are selecting a martial art in chapter 2 and 10 saves on dashingdon.
Real Time Update
Now, back to the real time update. I’ve written around 4k words this week, finishing the drawing and finance hobby events. Now we finally have all the hobby events that should be playable in this chapter! Yey. Now I’ve just got to do all of the relationship ones, and then, finally, do the homecoming event, ending the chapter once and for all!
Anyway, please play around with the chapter and tell me your thoughts! Happy revenge!
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Should be fixed now!
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Yes, looks all good now <3
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Minor bugs in CH.4:
This does not mean, however, that you will completely ignore your
*if baseball = 50
Baseball practices,
*if swimming = 50
swimming meet ups,
*if music = 50
band practice sessions,
*if drawing = 50
occasional painting sessions,
*if finance = 50
daily finance MeTube videos,
Because your first session in CH.3 increases the relevant skill by 5, none of these conditions is met and the game fails to print anything after “your”. The checks should be changed to >= in order to detect the activity.
*if party_week_prep != 2
With the bottle of Whiskey in hand,
*if party_week_prep != 2
Since you can't really carry all of that alcohol by yourself,
you approach the entrance of the house, only to meet two people dressed in black shirts and pants, with 'Security' written in white on their chest.
Bringing the alcohol omits the beginning of the sentence because neither condition matches it. The second check should be for = 2
edit: not sure if this is a bug, but the value of connor_clues_crush can be inconsistent and depending on event RNG. The random_event_4 can set it to either 2 or 3:
*if connor_clues_crush = 1
*set connor_clues_crush 3
Might this be related to his little tirade at the homecoming party?
*if connor_clues_crush != 1
*set connor_clues_crush 2
… but if the week 1 party fires after this event, it’ll just overwrite the value to 1 regardless of whether the MC has gathered the other clue from the random event. It’d be simpler to have the party add 1 to the variable value (initially set at 0) and the random event to add 2 to it. Then the variable would have value of 3 after both events fired, no matter the order.
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Thanks, I’ll fix everything for the next update 
Keep the bug reports coming please haha
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Alright, here’s one more then :v
The game is a bit confused about setting/resolving party_olivia_safe paths – the option to have Olivia hide doesn’t match with the scene of confronting Isaac, because the former sets the variable to 2, but the latter checks for value of 1.Changing the test here:
*if party_olivia_safe = 1
Isaac looks impatiently around, and then stares directly at you, "Where is she, ${f_name}?"
// ...
to party_olivia_safe = 2 should straighten it out.
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What a blast from the past! I literally just rediscovered this WIP yesterday lol. And then you updated today 
I found a bug tho. Dylan’s extra deets in his portfolio are available to read even before sending Burt out to stalk him. It’s only for him; everyone else’s full details get triggered correctly.
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Which character would you spare from revenge and which character would you have a romance with, guys? And Why? I need hints
I’m a little puzzled as to why there aren’t more opportunities to interact with your ally? Particularly with Homecoming imminent.
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I wouldn’t spare any of them but I do like the idea of my MC getting with Conner because she’s a girlboss and he’s a boyfailure. She probably finds him pathetic and if she actually gained feelings for him, she’d want to die which is funny.
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From what I’ve seen so far there’re too many characters, it is too hard to get along with them, most of them are really unlikable, tbh my ‘‘revenge’’ would be, beat a mf here, another mf there, and so on, I’d just beat the heck out of all the guys that participated and to the girls I’d probably throw dog shit on their faces and leave it at that, lol, also, I’d get a gun for you know, in case they gang up and come after me, in most games that’s not an option, when getting a gun is the first step before doing anything, much more so if you’re going against wealthy people with psychopathic traits.
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Your mc gonna crash out 
I think there’s a bug where if you try to hide olivia, the scene when you run with her is included too
I’ll romance Olivia and take revenge for the rest, she’s good enough for me and probably has the chance to find out about the MC first too, unless she change like Dylan then i’ll destroy her and switch to Angela, she’s cute but her behaviour is too… umm what should i call it, NPC-ish which is unfortunate
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Hey, this isn’t a bug or typo and I don’t want to sound like a snob or picky but there are three paragraph in a row that starts with “The first thing” its not a problem or anything but it feels like it messes with the flow(?) Of the writing a bit…
I really don’t want to sound a bit pushy but I just thought i’d let you know.
Anyway, thanks for the update! It’s quite lengthy and was really enjoyable!!
Does the update end at the end of week 4 ?
Yes.