This story is so interesting, looking forward to the next update
I really like this story and cannot wait to see what else you got. Itās a great concept. Iāll provide feedback next update. So far youāve done great!
Author please give me the chance to have the most brutal revenge, thankies! 
. I feel like having the vibes of pretty little liars, black mail, murder, etc.
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Hello! Liking this a lot, and was wondering if maybe you will add another body type option? Like being able to choose if youāre sexy or cute, be it girl or guyā¦ Iām not rlly a fan of being muscled lol
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Weekly Update
Hello! Iāll try to keep this short, since I came up with a new revenge idea this week and will present it here!
I originally envisioned the hobbies (baseball, bass, etc.) as a way to befriend the targets and learn their secrets. However, I realized this can also be a way to get revenge on them, so Iāve added a few new stats in the game, which are hidden at the moment, due to the idea being relatively new haha.
Each club/team will have a chemistry stat that the player can affect during the hobby events. For example, in week 2 you can have an event related to baseball where you can influence if Michael can do something pretty hardcore. If you do this, the teamās chemistry will decrease, lowering the overall performance of the team. This means that in the future there will be important games where the team can lose because youāve lowered team chemistry, lowering Michaelās chances of getting scouted.
You can also work on breaking up The Fighting Rooster, the Arts club, and ruining Dylanās and Vivianās relationship by going with them to all of their business seminars.
Anywaaay, letās get into the nitty gritty now. I only got 4k words done this week. Sorry, Iāll try to do better 
. I worked a lot on the hobby events, trying to make them moreā¦ interesting.
Next week the general public will finally get their hands on a devolved version of chapter 4, so be ready to help me improve the game and make it the revenge story weāre all looking forward to seeing!
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Jesus christ, thats dark 
. Mc is gonna straight up ruin peoples lives and dreams.
That is great idea. More effective than just embarrassing them. Hopefully we will be able to do some good damage. They will crumble under the might of the mc. Evil laughter mwaaaahhha.
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Yup, including others in the groups, who had nothing to do with the dumb spat and donāt even know the MC. Ironically, this makes MC more of a villain than the people theyāre trying to get their revenge on.
@fsix as they say villains are not born they are created. They created the villain mc now they need to deal with it. Also they might not have been involved in the spat but did anyone come forward to save the mc. They deserve what ever collateral damage will happen to them. If you think as a vengeful MC whose life they almost ruined , he will think like everything is fair in love and war.
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Iām talking about other members of these clubs who donāt even know who MC is, probably didnāt even attend the same preliminary school, much less were in position to ācome and save themā. Theyāre literally strangers, didnāt create anything and they get their lives ruined for no fault of their own.
MC thinking this is somehow āfairā would be just a self-centered brat who more than deserves all those people then coming back at them in return.
(i bring it up mostly in terms of choices and consequences in the game ā if the player chooses to head this route, itād be logical to face a backlash from people affected by it, not just the revenge targets)
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I donāt think anyone would come to know about the mc doing all that shit. Unless the mc chooses to reveal all this himself (and even then the mc is quite rich and dad is principal I think he will find a way to escape consequences).We are talking about a pre planned revenge . Thats the only deal with good revenge do shit but donāt get caught.
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You can already mess up and get caught while doing stuff for revenge as it is (the blackmail of photographer creep, which can go sideways, failing to get onboard and/or antagonizing potential supporters, etc) Being able to navigate and avoid such instances is part of the game. As opposed to just āi have rich daddy and pre-planned it allā plot armor.
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Lol, the only way MC would be the villain is if they started this shit show. The bullies didnāt think about what the video would do to the MCās life. Itās all fun and games untill the person you humiliated is labeled as a creep and would still be bullied if they didnāt change.
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Okay, I donāt wanna sound rude or whiny, but can we please not start another āIs revenge bad or good?ā argument in this forum?
People have different ideas of revenge, this is an IF, thereās likely going to be an ending where you donāt hurt anyone. Some people will have lines they donāt want to cross, some people will go all the way.
Thatās pretty much what it all boils down to.
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You know what would be even better?A mc who fully focuses on baseball and outshines Michael lol and gets all the scouts on himself.
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I love browsing through the forum and finding gems like this game.
Revenge stories are interesting, especially ones like these with plenty of options available.
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Really nice game. Iām expecting updates
Personally love this IF, itās rare ifs where you can be a spiteful as you want and be a true villain.
To say itās cruel, well yeha itās cruel but itās not real, you can go full evil nobody will really be hurt, so thereās no really need of morals here guysā¦
There should be more games like thisā¦
The only one thing that makes me tilt my head is the predetermined personality and thoughts at the start, really makes seem like a overspoiled over centered person who got handsome/beautiful and went over their head lol.
Same with the Adonis body type like I said before, some of us may prefer being ācuteā 
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As long as it is a choice, but please let me max out on the Greek god physique for my mc. And mc can still be a pretty boy even with that type of physique as that mostly comes down to facial features.
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