Note: You seem to use apostrophes instead of quotations frequently in dialogue I have changed some parts of sentences where I think it sounds better, but ofc you do not need to use them!
He stood dripping wet in your motherās study and kept saying āIām sorry, Iām sorry ā, as she sobbed , then cursed , then paced in fury.
" Er- what I meant to say was it was over quick. He hardly felt a thing, I can promise you." He stands awkwardly by the fire as your mother curses some more and sips (her?) tea.
ā(MC) needs to leave as soon as possible , then.ā
Jeska nods, seemingly on the same page with your mother. āI came for that exact reason. I have friends in Port Saint Agon ; you will need to flee the country and theyāll take you as far as you need to go.ā
āOne of his (Javidās) children is a lunaticā¦ā (āthemā wasnāt clear on who it was, previously thought it was the allies instead of the Kingās children ><ā)
You absolutely can. This will be mostly the princess Nevida route though and only if you manage to convince her that the current royal family is insane.
Yes but philandering with a demon will definitely make the priesthood hate you more than they already do.
I love it! The premise and choices seem wonderful, and mother dearest really seems like. . . a dangerous ally and enemy all in one, depending on our choices. Very excited about this one!
I really like it so far! I have one question, will there be same gender romance too? I love playing royalty characters that are conflicted between fulfilling their duty or following their hearts in this type of story!
Will the mc have like choices that describes his personality like he acts like a villian, a good person, cynical etcā¦?
Sorry if it sounds unclear in no good at English.
Itās fortunately pretty much standard on this site these days.
Now as for the plot, the one narrative we have so far is very obviously extremely biased. Nevertheless based on it the mcās half-brothers sound like incredible and incredibly incompetent assholes. The half-sister on the other hand, even the mcās supremely-biased mother seems to be unable to come up with anything more damning than āshe has her head in the cloudsā, which probably means sheās smart and studious or an idealist or both.
If that proves to be the case and sister is at least a decent human being to the mc then I could maybe see my mc helping her get the throne instead. My gay mc might like this option better than usurping for himself, particularly if it means he does not have to marry or sire children.
Is polygami allowed here?..I will state my current view of the women by the given description:
1)Cisi-> Sweet and caring
2)Hagia->Tsundere
3)Nevida->Lovebirds when I get to know her better
4)Arina Asan->I donāt like herā¦
I have changed some parts of sentences where I think it sounds better, but ofc you do not need to use them!
Really looking forward to seeing how it goes