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Note: You seem to use apostrophes instead of quotations frequently in dialogue :sweat_smile: I have changed some parts of sentences where I think it sounds better, but ofc you do not need to use them!

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  1. He stood dripping wet in your mother’s study and kept saying “I’m sorry, I’m sorry ”, as she sobbed , then cursed , then paced in fury.
  2. " Er- what I meant to say was it was over quick. He hardly felt a thing, I can promise you." He stands awkwardly by the fire as your mother curses some more and sips (her?) tea.
  3. “(MC) needs to leave as soon as possible , then.”
  4. Jeska nods, seemingly on the same page with your mother. “I came for that exact reason. I have friends in Port Saint Agon ; you will need to flee the country and they’ll take you as far as you need to go.”
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  5. Quotation!
  6. He interrupts again , before laughing
  7. “One of his (Javid’s) children is a lunatic
” (‘them’ wasn’t clear on who it was, previously thought it was the allies instead of the King’s children ><’)
  8. Quotation!
  9. “You’re already at the bridges , I fear
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I’m sold!

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You absolutely can. This will be mostly the princess Nevida route though and only if you manage to convince her that the current royal family is insane.

Yes but philandering with a demon will definitely make the priesthood hate you more than they already do.

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Thank you so much! I didn’t even notice the quotations haha. I’ll try and make who or what I’m referring to clearer moving forward.

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Will there be any ROs portraits / descriptions of the appearance or will we find out in the game?

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I did have some portraits of the ROs but I’m not allowed to post pictures yet. I will update the post to include descriptions though.

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I love it! The premise and choices seem wonderful, and mother dearest really seems like. . . a dangerous ally and enemy all in one, depending on our choices. Very excited about this one! :100:

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I really like it so far! I have one question, will there be same gender romance too? I love playing royalty characters that are conflicted between fulfilling their duty or following their hearts in this type of story!

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So far so good
I usually like medieval types
The description is also very nice
I will support this one from now on

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Will the mc have like choices that describes his personality like he acts like a villian, a good person, cynical etc
?
Sorry if it sounds unclear in no good at English.

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Yes you can romance people of the same sex.

Yes! When the story shifts to the MC’s perspective you will be able to choose their defining traits.

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I feel bad for the queen lol I see the word pirate and I have no choice but to pursue :woman_shrugging:t5:

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This looks so interesting :blush: Really looking forward to seeing how it goes

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It’s fortunately pretty much standard on this site these days.

Now as for the plot, the one narrative we have so far is very obviously extremely biased. Nevertheless based on it the mc’s half-brothers sound like incredible and incredibly incompetent assholes. The half-sister on the other hand, even the mc’s supremely-biased mother seems to be unable to come up with anything more damning than “she has her head in the clouds”, which probably means she’s smart and studious or an idealist or both.

If that proves to be the case and sister is at least a decent human being to the mc then I could maybe see my mc helping her get the throne instead. My gay mc might like this option better than usurping for himself, particularly if it means he does not have to marry or sire children.

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I want the witch she seems powerful

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I can’t wait to see - rather, read the description of -mothers face when she realizes I have no intention of helping her in any capacity

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Seems interesting. Currently a little short to really have much useful feedback but I’ll be following the development :slight_smile:

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Don’t feel bad. Pirates are where it’s at lol

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Is polygami allowed here?..I will state my current view of the women by the given description:
1)Cisi-> Sweet and caring
2)Hagia->Tsundere
3)Nevida->Lovebirds when I get to know her better
4)Arina Asan->I don’t like her


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Will there be a “new game +” mode?