I tried to like this story as the concept was interesting but I really can’t, there’s just too much lore dumps and info dumps and expositions and talking, not enough development or action tbh.
It was boring me the whole time. Some pages had 10 paragraphs of long winded purple prose jargon that confused me, pacing was slow, action was non existent and the villains are a vague blight which made visualizing it hard. Not a fan of this one.
Thanks. I’ll take that into account. I appreciate your feedback!
Check it again. Just fixed it. Been busy sorry.
Bet. Let me take a look.
See if cside does run on your phonebrowser, because quicktest makes things much easier
Does the web version support the automated tests nowadays?
I believe so?
It says you can edit and everything with it but you cannot test on IOS.
damn it 
I’ll check that out and get back to you. Give me like a day or two. Wedding planning is in overdrive right now 
Are u getting married? don’t get married yet
lol yes next year. Why not?
I beg you give us good endings first with your WIPs before then 
L O L my boy 
you’ll have endings before then. I promise you. I’m not working on anything else but the ones I have up. I’m locked in.
oh neat congrats
ignore the other dude and take your time. idk how youre even juggling 3 games and a wedding. youre a real taskmaster
I’m a disabled veteran rated at 90%. I can’t work so I’m just a at home dog dad lol. I have time. Just not as much right now
Hello, is this story still being worked on?
