Yes just much slower these days. I apologize for the long wait but I WILL finish this story. I got y’all.
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Just updated it. Let me know if there are any new errors please
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You’ve really worked hard. Are u still even holding up dude?
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Is Chapter 2 the end?
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Nah I fixed it. Chapter 24 is the end currently until I finish.
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Taking it one day at a time my dude
The game is still getting stuck at the end of chapter 2. I keep getting a perpetual loading screen, no matter options I choose.
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Hay @DiabloObsidian looks like its an upload error maybe. chapter 3, the stats page and possibly the interludes are missing from the code page list, you know from the list when you hit the code button on COGDemos, they are there in the startup text tho so ya upload issue maybe haha 
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Should be fixed. Thanks for that. I didn’t even peep.
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chapter10 line 733: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 2
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Oops lol
Updated
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chapter11 line 427: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block
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Just want to start off with even though I have just gotten to Chapter 3, the premise and overall writing is starting off great. I’m really liking how the MC is written even if it’s quite early.
Small nitpicks, on the first paragraph of Chapter 3, my male MC is written as “she was helping Marta”.
And immediately after this, Nym, Kael, Riven and Sable are introduced in extremely quick succession and it felt like the kitchen had this revolving door with new characters that I felt, as the reader, I should have already known them intimately. The 2 chapters before this really hammered in this point that the MC is isolated (with choices to isolate yourself even more) and to then have 4 unmentioned characters come in through the ‘only honest door’ maybe it’s just me but I was just shocked the MC had this many people close to them when it seemed like Theron/Solene were their only friend.
Maybe this is an overstep, but I feel like both Kael and Nym could have been introduced in the second chapter especially when they say they were both there in their introduction.
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I appreciate this advice and I’ll make those changes! Whatever other advice people feel the need to give me I will wholeheartedly take it and implement it! Thank you!
A couple of errors I came across while trying to get through chapter 11:
chapter11 line 442: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 1
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chapter11 line 118: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 2à
Hope that helps.
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