popping in to say that First being an exhibitionist gives me life and happiness
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More like First doesn’t understand the concept of modesty.
Freak in my eyes is actually good story there has to be consequences of a person who has powers like Superman with Kryptonite but this is different our main character can’t talk because of he or she power that’s what I do in my eyes and I believe every side in the story is trying to use he or she in my eyes this is a give and take relationship if they convince the person to join their side it’s like business they give you an ad they need you and I paid very well or better treatment of employee but there’s a difference between a family-owned business and a company owned business they’re both trying to get something but different goals and how they achieve so right now we’re in a situation we’re we’re being used it’s a give-and-take they’ll take something and they’ll give you something nothing is free I’m sorry this is what I do in real life I’ve a workaholic and I understand how businesses operate differently because I’m actually a part of a family business from my family I helped them with stuff we sell goods and we buy Goods from people that look good and still work depending on the price when you sell something to us so I’m viewing our main character from Freak as a business standpoint the heroes want something from us and they’ll giving and taking I know it’s f***** up viewing like this but this is my standpoint how I view things there’s always a give and take but if it’s a good thing or a bad thing is a meant to be seen in the story( p.s the one thing I suck at is English I’ll be trying to fix any grammar mistakes if anyone points amount for me and I’ll understand some people might hate this comment I don’t like it either but everything is given and take in life it’s not politics it’s just a view of life when you get older things are taken and given that’s how I view it Snoe you just keep getting me interested in the story and I keep reading it just to get back on it interviewing in different situations you just keep getting me interested in figuring out the puzzle so that’s what drove me to nitpick and figuring out what the hell is going on and why are these everyone’s interested in the main character and might not figure this puzzle until my dying days but I will try my best to figure it out hasn’t stopped me other stories like Wasteland 3 I’m playing because I’m working by the getting that in my brain)
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Modesty is for peasants, First is a majestic unicorn with a stunning bod and covering up that glory is an actual crime
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Despite what happens in the scene where you initially meet them, Silic most likely agrees with that sentiment. 
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great game! i like alot of the characters, cant wait for more 
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Is this still gonna be a thing? The idea seemed awsome.
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I think this song would fit perfectly for first.
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I love this story can’t wait to read more 
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Ok I love this… I really hope it won’t be dropped and really want to know what’s next 
Good work and stay healthy 
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Me too iv been checking back in on the story it’s so goooooood
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Thankyou all very much. I wish I could work on this more.
Much luv
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I really liked this game, hope it’s going strong. And good luck.
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Same as the above, played the wip and loved it, good luck.
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I am years late but damn this is still funny.
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Found the demo today at dashingdon, its fun and a good read, can’t wait for the rest of the story. 
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Is this still a thing?
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It will probably be a long time before it’s completed. This is my favorite WIP and I’ve been waiting for more since the last update.
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This is also one of my favorite WIP & hope it gets a new update soon
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