Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

Vyde here is freaking badass and…fabulous…lol XD

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So ten is pretty much batman if knew your every move?

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If batman was willing to go lethal.

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But that’s not my First and Empathy… :thinking:

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So on the non-combat front there is indeed hope that my First will eventually be able to become close to Vyde, if you know what I mean? :wink:

Also can’t wait until you get to the scenes where First actually gets to wear his/her new clothes.

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Until then, a game of Vyde and Seek? :hear_no_evil:

If it only applied to fear, then my First would part the sea and have a party at the bottom of the sea-no-more-evil. :see_no_evil:

I shall… sea… myself out. :speak_no_evil:

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From now on i proscribe 2 electric shocks and a railgun shot before bed.
we shall be neigh invulnerable at mid day we will have 3 hours of workout with car bench pressing. maybe find someone who can enchant a baseball bat for us to adapt to magic

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No respond for over 4 days!? Snoe my faithful bunny pet we’re (you’re) losing faaaaans! We must do something! Wait I’ve got an idea!
-drags First onto a stage and makes them look like a cute puppy-
Puppy First for sale! We need moar fans!

(Also psst! Keep up the good work my fav bunny writer)

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Hurry up and Take my money! I need a pet

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hey, I have a pet and its a little something called dignity, i’m selling it cheaply as I no longer require it.

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15 dollars, a old Dutch Gold Ducat, and a hug my final offer…:innocent: im trying to get a collection of them

The reality of that is actually pretty terrifying…

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Wait, doesn’t that mean we could potentially lose our translator? Or is it strictly in a combat scenario?

I really love your story. I’m a big fan. Good job!!!

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Thankya!
Hiya folks, I’ve been making an effort to do a little work every day, and I’ve done more work than I expected to put into the next section of the obstacle course!
I VOW I SHALL SLAY THIS BEAST!

An-y-way!
Update though only on the obstacle course enjoy.

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I really question KRV’s methods in regards to his swim test. Wouldn’t it have been smarter to strap a oxygen tank to First just in case? Is First even weak to intense pressure, like could he theoretically walk along the ocean floor if he had oxygen?

They didn’t expect First to drop like a stone. With their strength it’s safe to assume they could swim for a little while… but look at how dangerous would it be to give a prisoner an air tank KABOOM and First’s skill or habit of breaking things.

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So can we? Can First learn how to swim, at least for a short while?

Can I ask for a description of you’ve changed / added cause I really want to go beyond the clothes shop.

This last update expanded an earlier arc - the obstacle course scene. It still does not progress beyond the clothing store scene.

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