Formatting dialogue and everything else. Just a mishap or I screwed it all?

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@cup_half_empty Yes, thank you very much.

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Polls about COG, HG, and IF games

Hi all, hope you’re doing great. In my book I have a character that communicates through some kind of “telepathic” thoughts to the main character, like having a conversation with someone but without spoken words, no need of line of sight also, so there’s no visual aids nor physical references from that character, only “hearing” if I could say so. I have been using punctuation the wrong way since the beginning, so I need to learn which is the right way and the most accepted way, I need you to t…

Thanks again for all the support and great feedback. I’m looking forward to correct my book once and for all.