Hi, reading through the demo right now + really enjoying it! Just wanted to express my interest and help out with some proofreading.
minor typos I noticed - may update w/ more
When you choose what your position in The Council is:
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Succeded → succeeded
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Delete the comma perhaps? I think it might be extraneous
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Him → their
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Your → you
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Perhaps add “you became” or “you were appointed”
Also, I’m new so I can’t embed images lmao sorry for the imgur link