So they can have rainbow eyes then.
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Updated! A few hundred words added!
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Er… how do I edit the topic?
Might be your trust level, a mod could turn the post into a wiki for you so you’d be able to keep editing it. @moderators
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Interesting start! Lookin forward to more!
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Fixed!
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Hey! I’ve fixed the demo, you cheeky bug supporter
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It’s longer. If you didn’t encounter any questions from me at the end, like
Answer A
Answer B
Answer C
Then you’ve encountered an error. I’m sorry.
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It should be done now, the text for Green eye colour has also been uploaded. Thankyou for the information!
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You should be able to edit now!
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Thankyou to the Moderator!!
I’m thinking answer B this time
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I agree with B
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The hero seems to be a bit of a nut job lol but it’s better this way otherwise it would be just a boring hero tale. Probably lonely and desperate for attention even if it’s supposed to be their enemy. It’s nice to see the Lord start getting some customized options now, not just the eyes. Hopefully we get to pick the outfit soon and what happened to the old one that we got it’s job
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going with D, the demon king is very funny afterall.
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Very amusing premise, excited to see how it goes.
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This has an interesting premises but honestly till the prologue is done I can’t judge fully. I do like what I see so far and am I glad you are taking your time with it though. You don’t want a messy omelet after all. I wish you the best of luck and the lack of writer’s block on you.
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What’s the powerscaling of the story? Like can we make MC OP?
Or was the story not focused to those things? Like powerscaling and all?
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