Echoes of Kingdom: The Last Stand (WIP) Updated 9-8-24. 121k words

Thank you very much, I remembered putting in the code for changing the gender of the characters for the scene, guess I was wrong.

The jump to the Bila scene was due to this:


If you can figure out the problem you get a cookie

Answer: No *else after the *if

Anyway, I fixed the issue, I would never have noticed it without your help @Dreamer44 @AnneWest.
Thanks!

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Thanks for fixing! :+1:t5:

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Okay then, getting started on the Eastern Woods. Home of the Green Banner, Yobte College, and Salamis Web.
:deciduous_tree: :deciduous_tree:

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Hi, just started playing this. I have a question about RO’s. I’m playing a gay male grand general, and was wondering who the male RO is? Is it the guy who brings us the missive that the general says in handsome (with the blue eyes)?
I’m a bit confused as it mentions that you can romance the council members, but one is a female and the other is non-binary (?). Is there no male RO?

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Oh well, this is an embarrassing overnight by me…
Basically, there are three council members: A NB Weaver of Webs, female High Magicker, and male Grand General. However, I didn’t think of the fact that if you are a male gay Grand General or a female lesbian High Magicker you would get stuck with no RO.

RO’s are a new thing for me, I’ll need to think of a solution. Most likely creating a new, playergender RO for these situations.

Thank you!

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Ohhh, I see now. That makes sense.
So the lower ranked soldier isn’t a future RO, but is purely meant to show our sexual preference?
In any case, I’m glad I can indeed still play as a gay male Grand General (albeit, in future). :slight_smile:

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Exactly. If you had gone down another path, the Queen would fulfill this function.

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Interesting demo, left me pleasently surprised! Looking forward to future updates!

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I liked the demo very much and wanted to have the artificial intelligence draw pictures of the Followers of Light priestesses.


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Hello all and sorry for the long delay, I’ve been very much not in a writing mood this past month and my pace has suffered as a result.

Anyway, I added the Green Banner, Yobte College, and Salamis Web. Altogether we are at 80,000 words. I hope you all enjoy it and give me feedback!

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Can you marry the Queen?

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There isn’t a planned romance with the Queen. Maybe a political marriage.

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This is great

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Thank you!

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Added another scene between travels. This time, with a romance scene if you romanced one of your RO options!

I also fixed the issue with a gay Grand General or Lesbian High Magicker not having a suitable RO as well as some spelling and grammar mistakes.

Altogether, the game is currently up to 89,000 words.

Looking forward to hearing from you!

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Really liked the new update and I’m pretty sure that the update didn’t go on dashingdon because if you go back thru the logs of updates it’s not their
@YHGS

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What do you mean?

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I mean if go to dashingdon I can’t see the game I realize the way I said that was weird don’t know why I worded it like that
@YHGS

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I love it, tough it would need some fleshing out. Probably use some AI to put a bit more details but theme is exciting, I see huge potential keep it up :+1:

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Interesting, I usually try to write fewer descriptions so as not to bore readers. What parts do you think should have more details?

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