Dragon Kin (WIP)

I have no doubt some of dragon kin is a jerk just like human society is, some of them is extremist, genocidal, outright hateful but some is not, I would like to talk first and try to subdue them if things get violent not killing them, even though this won’t always work at least my MC know MC did as best they could.

I accept that sometimes things doesn’t go as planned such is life.

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I expect the Master would have to be killed, by someone. Most likely an ally or fellow dragon hunter will do it.

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i think we can go a cruel route and still be alive in the end, dont forgot we can make differnt allys the first one is the vamp already powerfull itself sure cant beat a dragon but humans? pretty much he can, and he hides plain in the city so hidding he can and defintly be a good ally in the end if you aint kill him of course^^
and its still pretty open what is with our first friend, he is looking for us too i am pretty sure of it

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I have no doubt the story will have conclusion even if we go cruel, the problem is always in the future the consequences will come if Dragon kin goes hard on human, there will be retaliation, rebellion and resistance to keep human subdued because this is supremacist goal, nobody like being occupied and treated like dirt, at least by being fair this prevent some of the headache from happening.

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they treat us as dirt even more there going so far to kill all dragons kins, i am someone if i get treated like dirt be sure i do the same too you and i make sure you will suffer it till the end, but i always protec those who treat me friendly or being kind to me, sure we aint know yet why the dragon kin slaughter startet but my gut tells me the humans couldent stand we are powerfull beings humans mostly always power hungry, what they aint can have they just remove that

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Ya know for the non violent paths i would find it hillarious to convert that master from his extremism just to see the shock from those that knew him alone :: snickers ::

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Ah, another Ragna chad.

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It gives an alternate goal to pursue.

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@stsword and @AnneWest

Added, will be in for the next update :slight_smile: I look forward to writing this scene in the future lol

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“replayed 6 times” :heart: glad you noticed :slight_smile:

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Awesome review I appreciate your input and am very thankful you took the time to get the typos and errors, made them very easy to find. All of the typos and grammatical errors have been fixed, will be in for the next update.

The height thing was brought up before, I’ll add some clarification in the early chapters.

That last two errors are proving very hard to pin down, I’ll find it eventually but it isn’t fixed just yet.

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Hello all, need a little help finding a bug. I wanted to see if everyone is receiving this error or if it’s only for one of the choices. The text should only display if you met Caesar during your first day at Evernorth after selecting #Just walk around, see the sights.

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This is the code for text. The text is dependent on your reaction to Caesar using mind skills on you.

*label c5inn_own1goal_kin2
*page_break
*if chapctour_reaction = “kill”
Our ${prince_princess} did not take kindly to it. I had to use multiple high level skills just to speak to ${him_her}.

Nyx raises a single eyebrow, "And why is that?"

The man's hands wring together, "I fear, ${he_she} would have killed me otherwise."

Nyx looses a cackling laughter, arms unfolding to keep from falling, one hand over her half scaled stomach.

She looks out the window again, recalling a bet she'd made with the others over who's spawn this is. [i]Definitely Draca Naga's Spawn, guess I'm winning this bet.[/i]

"My Lady Nyx, the spells faded within seconds of each other, this will not work again", Nyx looks to the Moon, [i]${he_she} has proved to be very impressive, can't wait to meet ${him_her}[/i]. Her smile subsides when she remembers the human still prostrated on the floor. "Get up Caesar, we have work to do."
*return

*elseif chapctour_reaction = “firm”
“Our ${prince_princess} did not take kindly to it.”

Nyx raises a single eyebrow, "And what makes you say that?"

The man's hands wring together, "Our ${lord_lady} practiced temperance, but I fear, ${he_she} would have killed me, if I further offended."

Nyx looses a cackling laughter, arms unfolding to keep from falling, one hand over her half scaled stomach.

She looks out the window again, recalling a bet she'd made with the others over who's spawn this is. [i]Sound's like Draco Baku's Spawn, guess I'm losing this bet.[/i]

"My Lady Nyx, the spells faded within seconds of each other, this will not work again", Nyx looks to the Moon, [i]${he_she} has proved to be very impressive, can't wait to meet ${him_her}[/i]. Her smile subsides when she remembers the human still prostrated on the floor. "Get up Caesar, we have work to do."
*return

*elseif chapctour_reaction = “nice”
“Our ${prince_princess} is so kind and merciful.”

Nyx raises a single eyebrow, "And what makes you say that?"

The man's hands wring together, "Our ${lord_lady} surely could have killed me, but made no move to do so."

Nyx unfolds her arms in confusion. Standing to face Caesar, she considers killing him now, [i]Did he somehow fuck this up and get the wrong person?[/i]. She considers it a moment before leaning back onto the window. [i]Caesar is mortal but his A Rank skills shouldn't be completely useless, despite the ${prince_princess}'s power ${he_she} is still a child.[/i]

She looks out the window again, recalling a bet she'd made with the others over who's spawn this is. [i]Is it Draco Baku's Spawn? Or the other one's maybe? Either way I'm definitely losing this bet.[/i]

"My Lady Nyx, the spells faded within seconds of each other, this will not work again", Nyx looks to the Moon, [i]${he_she} has proved to be very impressive, can't wait to meet ${him_her}[/i]. Her smile subsides when she remembers the human still prostrated on the floor. "Get up Caesar, we have work to do."
*return

*else
Error: inn goal check, church sub 2
*return

  • I can see the story text
  • I only get the error
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That’s when I wrote that comment, I am sure already replaying this like 20 times or more.

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I’ll retrace my steps and let you know the source, where it pops up.

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Hello everyone, I’ve updated the game today, the update is largely unfinished, you’ll see a lot of “Frame” where it’s unfinished at.

I’ll be stepping away for a bit to handle a lot of personal issues and won’t be updating as often but have no intention of abandoning the project. Thank you all again for your support! :slight_smile:

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No worries real life comes first and foremost looking forward to reading what ya got for us and eventually more in the future :smiley:

@Dubs3 adding this to make sutmre it reaches you lol just opened up game got a error message on the saves.

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@Dubs3 hi, the save load system isnt working. not sure if anyone has told you.

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We understand,take all the time u need

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The update was so good love me some combat in stories like this makes me remember my love of ttrpgs. Can wait to meet Eve again the reunion between her and mc is currently the thing I’m looking forward to the most. Hope everything in your personal life gose well. :smile:

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Just finished the demo and I am soooo hyped for the confrontation between the dark draca and us since we’re in the mix too! I hope we get to see our friend again in good health aswell

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