I got an error when coming back from the schoolar guild
Error: inn goal check, church sub 2
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That’s exactly what I meant. Being a herbalist, I met the child of a scholar and was invited… but the option to visit the guild is gray in my playthroughs. Now I’m wondering what this is about…
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It might not be written yet?
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I did some codediving just now, and while it IS written -
there is a lost variable (not sure if that’s the right term) for herbalist.
- blacksmith
- herbalist
Maybe Dubs3 wanted to tweak the text a little more, maybe he just forgot.
But if you somehow received this invitation as a herbalist, I don’t understand anything at all.
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To meet up with J at the scholar guild you have to go straight to it, end your day early and tell T you’re going. That was how I managed to go
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Speaking of dragons since we’re (dragon kin) I wonder if there are any true dragons still around that the Slayers don’t know about. Like our parents were they dragon kin as well if so when did we get separated or are we the product of a polymorphed dragon and human. I wonder if we will ever find out.
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I do hope you will be able to meet some actual dragon, and based on your stance towards humans maybe help them wreak havoc and carve out their own Dragon Kingdom or help reconcile them with the humans. That would certainly be fun.
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From what I gather from the story, MC is part of ancient dragon race, even though there option choice MC can be Hybrid variant as well, the species do have records stretching way back into the past this just a suspicion at best but the other Dragon in stormland probably the normal variant of Dragon Kin, while MC is ancient variant of the Dragon kin, the hunter probably doesn’t make distinction between the two since they’re seemingly oblivious when the scholar comment about ancient dragon during the meeting.
It’s not known how MC is birthed though is it from egg or just normal birth? What’s the parents fate? It’s possible the parents was away when the hunter attack the nest if MC was born from an egg causing this separation, since MC display such potential raw power during awakening I don’t think Hunter can take down MC parents that easy MC parents should be way more powerful than MC and surely not a stranger to hunter tactics because they’re able surviving that long.
The answer only author know.
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The author only know for now. muwhahaha! muwhahahaha! 
I really like this story so far I can’t wait to find out more about Nyx and the two kin she mentions.
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Currently there is nothing besides this forum although I have been looking into how other author set ups and will probably try to emulate those
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This is excellent feedback lol thank you, and found and fixed, I’ll have it updated today
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You are all correct, I did forget to add. Scenes got hard to follow for me at some point, just forgot to add it. Thanks for making it easy to find! Fixed it, I’ll have the update in today
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It was two lords and two ladies right?The lords were on making dragon worshipped option and the ladies were on the other option.
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I’m glad it was helpful!
Don’t worry, this is completely understandable - with such a volume of text, it is not surprising to skip such a small line. Thanks for the quick reaction, you’re rock!
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Enjoyed the update @Dubs3 great work, especially loved the vampire hunter scene🔥 Anyways looking forward to meeting Eve again and our other Kin.
Typo's etc...
short brown hair and…
air
Capital letter S
remove the ‘is’. Also change (“the”) to your nights together.
Capital letter S
“adjusts her”
herself
She & Little does she know…
himself
him
Because
an
As she or just She
Capital letter S
her
potion
Spaces between paragraphs. She is & She follows, both need Capital letters.
This part shouldn’t exist didn’t meet her, so not possible.
Code leaking in
I Probably didn’t get all the issues especially as there are quite a few gender swaps, but since this a demo, there’s bound to be minor mistakes here and there, either way you’re doing a fantastic job, both writing and creating this story. 
Author hard at work
Our Dragonkin Intimidating Dear Author
ME + Other Readers
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Hello @Dubs3
I love the game so much. Structure is very good, mechanics are good, lore is very interesting and good so far, characters are interesting. Now some problems: in scholar’s guild gender swaps all over the place, cariers are mixing up and after the meeting this appears: Error: c5inn_own1goal, variable text error.
Suggestions: adding some more cariers can be interesting, adding some MC names with flawor text wil be very entertaining. Keep up the good work.
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VERY thorough feedback lol. I may have the most helpful supporters cause you guys really make it easy to track these down. I’ve gotten most of the errors you listed, except the one with pronouns in the wrong case.
The variables are ${he_she} but I didn’t make a ${He_She}, so the pronoun errors are mostly me procrastinating going back to add and change those.
Also love the memes
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I’ve been working on this, I suppose this is how my dragon would look like.
I try to use different ear, different horn and different take on clothing, one is casual armored, another is mystique looking apparel. for each they basically use same base model with slight adjustment.
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Well, you can use the DnD dragon type as inspiration.
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That’s the thing here MC is not average run of the mill dragon, so I guess i try to make it different.
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