Dragon Kin (WIP)

New Project Dragon Kin.

Currently it’s about 3 Chapters, 20k Words, 23k coded) done, and I plan on updating every 2 weeks.

Synopsis:
Play as a Dragon Kin, on the run for most of your life from the Dragon Slayers and still coming into your power.

Finally getting older, quickly becoming a powerful entity, shape the world to your will, or live your life in peace.

To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/16495

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

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Loved the imtial bit from dashingdon from a few days ago looking forward to seeing what we got now.

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this was really interesting! i like the worldbuilding, with adventurer levels!

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Our first friend keeps switching gender. I chose male but it kept using female pronouns a couple of times. Other than that I have enjoyed the story so far

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Like the story so far, so I’ll totes keep an eye on it! Btw will you add a save function in a future update?

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Enjoy the story and it was before he released the demo like this I was reading it into the other section pretty good can’t wait to read more of this

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im loving the story so far but i slightly disappointed that i cant choose how many wings my mc has.

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I’ll get that fixed soon! Thank you!

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I love it can’t wait to throw lightning spears at people

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Sounds interesting and curious what a dragon kin is

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I found some bugs especially during the letter of the dragon slayer to his boss
when you protect the boy, the dragon slayer says it was odd and then proceed to describe a bloodbath like you have killed all the bandit and when you use fire it lacks the description in the same letter

other than that, it’s actually quite a good beginning and i’m quite eager to see more

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So far pretty enjoyable start
Looking forward to the world building and adventure to follow

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Got my attention.

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i would like to see different povs like the other characters

but i love it 10/10 ^^

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Like eve’s Pov after dealing with the enemy Burning/Freezing/Zapping them

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Yeah to see what they think and what are they thinking about but i love this story line

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Too bad none of our actions have caused an actual impact on anyone yet even if the mc murdered everyone. I enjoy their reactions to stuff especially since everyone thinks we are just a dumb animal

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Found and fixed! :slight_smile: These are difficult to find sometimes since they don’t trigger any errors on my end. Thank you for pointing it out, I’ll have it polished for the next update :+1:

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Oooo another dragon type IF, I’m here for it!!

Also, Just in case you forgot; there’s no save.


Mistakes:

  1. Your smooth unfurl from your back, powerful and imposing, and you launch into the air. The word Wings is missing. (when we chase after the last guy standing after killing the folks who grabbed gavin)

  2. What we had was special, I’m sure she feels the same. ( He)


Conclusion: I genuinely loved the start to this, I’m excited for more of the story!!

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I think that’s the problem people get handle evolution think of a dragon and it became slowly shrink down into a human species that would surprise anyone or the darker turn pretty much involving human Supremacy anything that’s not human can’t have a thinking brain because we haven’t seen any other species except the dragonkin and the human

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