Devil On Your Shoulder, by Lisa Fox, author of A Pirate’s Pleasure
This is a Heart’s Choice game. It is genderlocked f/m: the PC is a woman and all of the ROs are men. It is expected to be 2 out of 5 chili peppers
See your name in lights on Broadway! Find fame, fortune, and true love! All it costs is your immortal soul.
It’s the brink of the new millennium, and you’ve moved to New York to chase your dreams of Broadway stardom. Every day you walk past the theaters where legendary shows—Rent! Les Miserables! Phantom of the Opera!—bring audiences to their feet and launch the careers of people just like you.
But hitting it big turns out to be harder than you ever imagined. When your phone-psychic roommate tries to help you reverse your fortune, you accidentally summon a powerful demon. A very handsome powerful demon, who instantly turns all of his infernal might towards helping you! With a wave of his hand, he can grant your every wish. Take down your rival? Save your local bookstore from the gentrification that’s starting to creep into the East Village? Win the lottery? It’s done!…as long as you give the demon a bit of your soul.
Meanwhile, you’re trying to make another one of your dreams come true: to find love. Will it be with your neighbor, the dashing photojournalist? The rising star politician with visions of how to make New York a better place? Or maybe you’re drawn to the demon himself, always at your side to tempt you and whisper in your ear….
Become everything you’ve dreamed of in the glorious, glamorous, gritty concrete jungle of 1990s New York. Dance at a star-studded gala; sing your heart out at auditions; stroll through Central Park; dive deep into the graffiti-filled subways. Will you give in to temptation so that you can achieve certain stardom, or attempt to make it on your own and risk losing it all?
How far will you go to see your name in lights?
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Tips on How to Give Feedback
We’re looking for “high level” and “low level” feedback. Not mid-level feedback.
Low-level = typos and continuity errors. A continuity error is when a character’s gender flips, or someone comes back from the dead, or you run into a plotline that just doesn’t make sense (because it’s probably a coding error). For these low-level issues, screenshots are very helpful. If you see a problem, take a screenshot, or copy and paste the text that is in error, and email that.
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“I had a great time and saw only a few spelling errors,” is not useful feedback. In fact, it’s the sort of thing that results in you not being given access to future betas.
Some examples of useful feedback :
- In Choice of the Dragon, you get to choose what type of wings you have: leather or scaled. Someone wrote in and asked about having feathered wings. Great suggestion! Done!
- In “The Eagle’s Heir,” someone asked about Eugenie. They said that the romance moved too quickly–because she only appeared in the last third of the game–and wished they could have had an opportunity to meet her earlier. So the authors added an opportunity to meet her and start the romance earlier in the game (in a scene that already existed).
- In “Demon Mark: A Russian Saga” several people commented on how the PC’s parents were unsympathetic, so the authors added a choice or two to deepen the relationship with the parents in the first chapter, to help better establish their characters.
- Pointing out a specific choice and saying, “this is who I imagined my character was at this particular moment, and none of these options seemed right for me. I would have liked an option to do X instead,” is also really helpful feedback.
- If you choose an #option and then the results of that #option don’t make sense. Like, if you thought an #option might test one stat, but it seems to have tested a different one.