Thanks for listening to my borderline condescending opinions lmao. I apologize if I made you feel badly in any way.
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No, it’s okay, it was constructive and it’ll help me improve my story in the long run 
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I’m glad you said that. I was half expecting you to say, “Borderline?”
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NOO IT ENDED I WASNT READYYYY
(This is awesome, I must have more)
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Just a quick update—I made some more fixes and improved the dialogue clarity. Hopefully, everything flows better now. Apologies for how rough the prologue was! The good news is that I can now fully focus on Chapter 1.
A huge thanks to everyone who helped—I really appreciate you all! I also added some extra text for good cook MCs regarding healthy food options and a streetsmart MC during the conversation with A about MC-14, due to something @ClaimedMinotaur brought to my attention. That’s all for now! 
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Does the demo go past the prologue? Whenever I try to go past the “End Prologue” part it says there is an error.
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The end of the prologue is the end of the demo for now!
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Interesting start, looking forward to more!
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Oh … oh I like this. The fact I can play a f!mc with a wife and the potential for some fun toxic yuri? Sold. 100% here for it. grabby hands
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