🌈 Dear Diary, We Created a Plot Hole! (A Slice-of-Life Fantasy Adventure set in the Philippines) ~ [UPDATED Aug 31 | 608,000 words]

That error seems to be gone, but now I get this one when I’m trying to see stats:

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Thank you for the report! :slightly_smiling_face: I fixed it now. Please let me know if more pop up!

Also sorry for doing it like this, the demo and my current files are different from each other and one bug fix just resulted in a chain of bugs.


Edit: Also it seems like the background music isn’t playing anymore because of issues with Dropbox. Looks like I’ll have to find an alternative. Sorry about that!

Can anyone try it and check if it’s not just me? Thank you!

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It was playing in my first play through

Hello! Just to clarify, I’m talking about the MWCaPH! demo, not IAC (although it’s probably in danger too). Did you try it just now? The flashback sound is still playing, but not the music.

I received a notice from Dropbox yesterday and I didn’t see it until now. Either way, I’ll try to replace them with something more reliable as soon as I can. I’m just not in a good headspace right now.

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THIS IS SO COOL!! For a moment, though I knew this was like a…side story to the main story, aptly named a sidequel, I was confused as heck. But then once we reached the cliffhanger, everything added up. Especially since I replayed MWCAPH again, the main characters’ names in that can be the same as in this and omg that’s a trip in a half tbh!! This was incredibly well done!!

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@KrazyKeke Oh, wow, thank you so much for the compliments! :blush:

There’s actually quite a few references to MWCaPH! There’s the bedtime story of course, but in case you didn’t notice… Julie, Wayne, and Roselyna actually have cameos in the story. Oh, and the cover art for MWCaPH! is based on the school bus battle in IAC too.


Anyway, I forgot to add this to the announcement post, but I’ve got a new sideblog for IAC! This is where I’ll be posting the spoilers and sneak peeks (instead of the main blog) from now on.

And speaking of, here’s two character art sneak peeks for Wayne’s story world!

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Meet Huckle Goldberg and Blueberry Mimidae-Goldberg-Corvidae, co-founders of D’ Warblings Refugee Camp (that D and Rnst visited)!


Also, the background music for MWCaPH! seems to be working again! It was probably just timed out for a bit, but this means that it might be an issue again later, so I left the notice for now.

Again, thank you for reading IAC so far!

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Hello! If you have played IAC, I’d appreciate it if you can answer this survey! Thank you! :blush:

I’ve also fixed a bunch of errors in IAC. Please report if you still find any. :globe_with_meridians:


And if you still haven’t answered the Chapter 2 Survey for MWCaPH!, I’d appreciate it if you can answer it too! The playthrough code is not required to submit.


Edit: Here’s an update log for IAC from the last few days!

:large_blue_circle: Feb. 5, 2022

  • Fixed even more formatting and flavor text errors.

:large_blue_circle: Feb. 7, 2022

  • Added link to the IAC Survey.
  • Fixed various typos and errors.
  • Removed spells from the sci-fi branch.

:large_blue_circle: Feb. 8, 2022

  • Improved Babel worm typo and error detection.
  • The game should now launch in portrait mode for mobile users! Please report if anything needs more adjusting.

Please note that due to the jam restrictions, there won’t be any further content updates for a while except bug fixes.

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I made some bingo cards for MWCaPH! (and IAC)!

I thought it’d be a little fun to share some teasers and maybe a few fake spoilers… (Although the ones for IAC mostly contains scene ideas for the future rather than teasers/fake spoilers)

I hope you like them!

MWCaPH! Bingo Card 1

MWCaPH! Bingo Card 2


IAC Bingo Card

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Those are beautiful and seem really fun :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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v2.2.10

:memo: v2.2.10 (Dear Diary Update)

Update Log

GENERAL

• Changed game title to ā€œDear Diary, We Created a Plot Hole!ā€
• Added links to In Auctorem Credimus.

CHOICES

• Added a new preset name for the Horror and Mystery settings.
• Added a new pair of preset names for the twins.
• Added an option that you used to go by a different name when you were born. The original name won’t be asked.
• Crying in the confrontation scene with B now increases your charm slightly.

QUESTS AND ACHIEVEMENTS

• Added new achievement: [Five More Minutes] (currently unobtainable).

STATS AND MECHANICS

• Added 9 Enneagram Traits for each of the birthday wishes and adjusted their personality stat bonuses.

ART

• Updated cover art with the new title.

CHANGES AND FIXES

• Playthrough Stats have been updated with latest data.
• The About Me section has been updated to give more information.
• MC’s phone is now a gift from Maggie.
• STR Bonus from having less than 14 STR is now moved to Chapter 3, and gives bonus EXP otherwise.
• Background music now changes after Roselyna’s hug in Chapter 1.
• Changed background music when meeting Roselyna in Chapter 2.
• Changed background music that plays after the demo.
• The background music now switches earlier when you cry during B’s confrontation.
• Changed dreadlocks to locs.
• Fixed flavor text about MC not mentioning their twin having red hair.
• Fixed certain dream job options giving the incorrect class.
• Fixed incorrect locket images.
• Roselyna is now slightly more huggable.

If you haven’t been following the blog, this post has all the info you need.


Also, in case you’ve been out of the loop, I wrote In Auctorem Credimus, a 50k word sidequel story for DDWCaPH! last month. You can check out this post for more information.

Goodbye.

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While Dear Diary is more suitable, isnt it a longer title now than earlier

I hope you get to feeling better. I know how demoralizing not getting feedback and such has been for you (so much so that it makes me cry), but I hope you know that there are people who really do like the story but stay quiet. I know that it still sucks, but it does mean that they are satisfied with how you’re going with it and just want more. I don’t know what it’s worth, but I’ve been here reading each update since the original 2015 version. It’s an adorable story and I would love to see more. I’ve tried to offer the support I can with hearts and feel guilty because I know it’s not what you want, but I’m not a feedback giver. Like it’s not in my skill set. Still, you’ve done so much with the customization, with the relationships, really with the coding language as a whole. It’s an incredible project and all of your work shows.

I’m sorry it went this way for you. Again, I really hope you get to feeling better. :purple_heart: :purple_heart: :purple_heart:

Now to recover from crying because I’m far too empathetic not to.

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For me, it’s really the little details and the creative artworks that you made for your story that put a smile on my face while reading it. Plus there is not a lot of stories out there that let you play as a child, and finishing and publishing it would be so cool :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Take all the time you need and come back when you’re ready. We will be here :two_hearts:

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See you all when I’m better.

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Dude. This game is absolutely sick.

I’ve played quite a few WIPs/COGs, and this one was just so… unique! First off, there are SO many elements that just elevate it to a whole different level (e.g. the music, the actual sound effects when you pick certain choices, the animated cover art at the top of the forum thread, whatt - the background color changes to signify different kinds of text, the pictures that indicate stat changes etc.)

And then the writing. It’s just so well-written I could cry. Plus, it’s light-hearted too, and spliced with humour, and the tone just fits the theme/game to a T.

And finally, the way you deal with pretty deep themes within the bounds of your game is something I really want to bring to the WIP I’m working on, particularly on family relationships, memories of one’s childhood, and how both affect the kind of traits we pick up.

All in all, I really enjoyed the game, and please do rest well and take care! :slight_smile: Sending you some love <3

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So I just finished IAC.
I just wanted to say that I think this did a fantastic job of showing your style. It’s harder to tell in DDWCaPH since the real story hasn’t started yet, but I love it. The way you played with everything, like the formatting the choices was very fun. And your sense of humor was fantastic and I found it very funny. Your usage of fourth wall breaking was better than I’ve ever seen. Way more in tune with tropes and the story itself than any other attempt I’ve come across. That’s saying a lot given how easy it is to fuck it up and for that sort of humor to be cringey. Also, got to be a vampire and that’s an automatic +500 points for me. Also (again), the UI was beautiful. Very mature :slight_smile:

I hope you get to feeling better over everything. You have something unique and wonderful to share, and I’d love to see more, whatever story or direction you go.

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Happy Birthday to my little goobers!

It’s February 28! That means it’s Roselyna’s 14th birthday (and Wayne’s 3.5th) today, but they’ve been living in my head for about 6 years now.

I neither have the time nor the energy to draw something new for these two gremlins, so here’s some old watercolor character design studies (and some 3D art) I made for them several years ago. Heehee.

Thank you Tommy and Prim for everything. For giving me the inspiration to draw and write, for making me feel like a kid again. I know you two are far from the most behaved children ever (I know all your secrets and the stupid things both of you did when you were eight and nine), but you’ll always be my favorite.

Love, Franzinyte

Watercolor Artwork

3D Art

This is probably gonna be my last update for a while, so I’ll leave you all with a sneak peek from Chapter 3:

Summary

Uncle Robert’s scowl greets us as he opens the door. " Hoy Patrick," he says in a weird voice as he taps his foot with a hand on his hip. "I told you to go home early! Where did you bring the twins this time, ha? "

ā€œIā€¦ā€ Paddy’s confusion turns into a snicker. ā€œWhy’re you wearing Mommy’s shawl, Pops?ā€

" Her shawl?" Uncle asks, suddenly breaking character. ā€œWow, who do you think made all of them?ā€

ā€œAnd that’s why you’re wearing them now?ā€

He drapes the hanging ends of the shawl around his neck. ā€œWell, I heard you calling for her. Guess I still need to work on my Mommy Julie impressionā€¦ā€ He scratches his head and steps aside to let us enter. ā€œHow’re my big babies doing today?ā€


@burninglights Omg hiii! Sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much for the kind words!

Yup, it’s a shame that there aren’t many light-hearted stories around here. And yes, the themes are very important to the story and I wanted to make sure that each character has a different family dynamic.

And I really appreciate you taking the time to check out my WIP! I’m also sending you some love in return :heart: though I do wish I had the time and energy to review your WIP as well. Good luck with your project! :blush:

@ElliWoelfin Thank you! :smiling_face:

I’m very glad you found IAC funny and that you found the style to your liking. It doesn’t have much slice-of-life elements, but if you liked IAC, you’re going to love the rest of DDWCaPH! as well. And that’s just the beginning, there’s a lot more I haven’t revealed yet.

I actually don’t like blatant fourth wall breaking very much, so I prefer to use it as a story element like it’s a part of the worldbuilding rather than the narrator talking to the reader directly, which destroys the immersion and gets annoying eventually.

And yes, vampires. Hehe. :vampire:

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The artworks look lovely! I’m happy that you are still progressing on chapter 3. Can’t wait to learn more about those little rugrats :two_hearts:

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Aww, happy birthday to Roselyna :slight_smile:

Absolutely! And stories where non-romantic (e.g. familial) relationships are central.

Of course! I’m so glad I finally got around to playing your WIP! It felt very much like a cup of hot chocolate - definitely reminded me of childhood :hugs:

Thank you also for the kind wishes on my project - right back at ya! And please!! Don’t feel obligated/don’t worry about it at all, I don’t mind in the slightest!

P.S. The character designs are absolutely adorable (love the poses on the right especially! :P)

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I really like your work especially with the background music. It really sets up the atmosphere very well! :smile: I also have a question, how did you add the background music? I’m really curious. Thanks Author-san! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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