Oh boy ! so no darkseid beam ? 
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Characters in this story donāt breath so producing anything is easy. To produce a bulletproof skin and to launch heavy punch donāt exhauste people. Powers can go 24 hours without a problem.
Any action provoke a reaction and a cost to it. In this case endurance bar
A tank hero can go berserk but not for long due to the heavy consumption of his energy bar. 
Till next time.
Genesis approaches behind me and turns away from the body. I hear the mage gang as he rushes away. Lugh switches places with Genesis, and he inspects the body and gives an approving head nod.
gag.
Chap 6 choice: āI start to look at her in a new light and give her a smileā
pronouns do not change.
A chilly breeze cuts through the alley causing Valentin to shiver. āPerhaps somewhere cooler?ā
We make our way to Valentinās car before driving a couple miles away from the GEMS building. The icy bite of the carās air conditioning brings us to more comfortable temperatures.
does not make sense (maby it is hot outside?)
Chap 10 āWe can all meet up later to discuss things further.ā Rowen suggests but is already turning his back to us.
pronouns not match (her in my case).
There is a long pause before I hear from the man. āIt has been. Aside from Cathy. I guess I was lucky to find her.ā
My MC does not react like it is first time he hear her name, but should. (COE route, he goes for Genesis in fork)
telekinetically the open the door and
With a use of telekinesis I it out and opens it.
as the vigilante strong arms her back into the master bedroom.
Chap 15 āWe are going to need more than that.ā I say trying to push the subject without forcing her to say it outright if she is worried about someone listening in.
pronouns not match. (Valentin is male)
Chap 18 Iām surprised that Rowen would use any of is for this if she is going a different direction.
Us
Sorry, you a right. I didnāt know about such slang until today. But in my defense, the expression is extremely ambiguous.
I saw you mention that you wanted book 2 to be from the sidekickās perspective. This might be the perfect opportunity for that. The sidekick could be being out of their depth and staying on the defensive.
Villain could say something like, āWhy are you running, pipsqueak? Scared Iāll snap you like a twig?ā
Sidekick: āRunning? Thatās cute. Iām stalling, moron.ā
Villain: āStalling? For what?ā
Sidekick looks behind the villain to see MC coming in hot. Villain turns around with just enough time to be scared shitless before getting annihilated.
That might be an event for Part 3. Part 2 isnāt just from the POV of the sidekick, the main character from Part 1 is in almost none of Part 2. Part 2 is an origin story for a second main character before the two come together for Part 3. Iāll cover more of that when we get there.
Iām having a hard time understanding what you are trying to say here, my apologies. Are you making a suggestion that I should implement an endurance bar? Or are you pointing out that I already have?
If the later, this is true and it can change the outcome of events when the main character gets tired. A tired MCās stats will start to lower.
@Haaron Thank you for pointing those out, Iāll try to have those addressed in the next update.
Hey, the saves seem to be the same as another wip I saved in if that makes sense???
Iām guessing that this is DashingDon?
This is a very interesting event. Do you know which games has those saves? My bet this that there is another game that has teh same ID as mine? Iām not sure if that is how Don tracks the saves in the cookies.
EDIT: Fixed the issue. A friend pointed out what was going on. I have fixed it, but it will break all old saves.
Iām going to be honest here, I have no ideaš I literally have over hundreds of ifs open and I forgot which ones are the same. I remember heroes and heretics to be the same, but when I checked it, the saves are broken so I probably remembered wrongš¤·š¼āāļø
Never mind you fixed the issue, thank you but thatāll probably suck for everybody else 
It might, but that type of thing happens rather regularly in this thread. Itās almost the norm now.
Well thatās comforting. Canāt wait to be a regular hereš
I didnāt wish to dig through this whole thread to see if this had been reported at all, but i get this error when trying to explore any of the power customization options.
This error happens a lot. Youāre on DashingDon, right? Use the other link. I try to warn people, but there is a continued love for the site, so Iām continuing to make it available. Unfortunately, this is an issue with the site using out-of-date ChoiceScript.
Ah, thatās fair. I was unaware Dashingdon had that issue. Thanks for letting me know!
Yes it was a suggestion, in case you wanted to put those invincible power or those bulletproof in the story. An energy bar or effort bar stat could make those things easy. Each time a power is invoke that energy bar or effort get depleted.
Hello everyone,
I have updated the two demo links to v4.1.
This update add more options for costume creation. I will still be taking suggestions, but I have added the choices I liked.
This update will also include the first snippets of the corrections after my editorās feedback. There are only specific chapters and routes that have been reviewed so far. A lot of fixes are for spelling, grammar, and clarification. However, some will also notice that Lugh no longer talks the same in Chapter 5. As I roll out more edits, I will continue to update Lughās dialogue to be more appropriate to the character including phrases and the confidence he should have.
I want to shout out my editor for leaving a positive mark on Lugh as a character. She has done really well in making me see how he should be and I agree whole heartedly. Hopefully his update will be well received. Since the only edits of him so far are in Chapter 5, his character will be extremely inconsistent.
Lastly, I have advanced the story to Chapter 25. This chapter hasnāt even fully received my normal first editing sweep and I expect a lot of corrections to be coming. This Chapter is busy and there are four different opening to it depending on where you place the MC in the previous chapter.
Demo Changes (07/17/2024):
Added Chapter 25
Updated edited file for the Prologue, Chapter 1 (CEO), Chapter 2, Chapter 3 (Aegis Route), Chapter 4 (CEO), and Chapter 5. Edits should fix most spelling and grammar mistakes while providing more clarity
Added more options to costume customization
Fixed Reported bugs
I hope you all enjoy!
Going to start new game then revisit previous chapter.
@Dvalor53 Really liking most of the new costume options! Now some of my profiles are more viable to copy their appearances now because of these new options.
@Dvalor53 When you re-add weapons in the future, are you planning on keeping the mechanic from the old demo in a different form. The mechanic where you could combine certain elements with your melee attacks or are you planning on replacing it with something else?
Edit: @Dvalor53 There were some grammar errors in the scene where everyone is explaining what their powers are and I started noticing some of them when it was my turn to explain my powers. I donāt remember which power options had the errors in them. Since I was playing my Operator MC, I had almost all of my powers except Superspeed and Hyper Reflex so I canāt say anything about them yet. Also, during the scene where you can get in a fight with Jordan, my MC was able to use Telekinesis when she shouldnāt have been able to since that power was locked to the Power Armor source. Same with Danger Sense in some situations I think.
Edit 2: I hope some of the clothes from the Flair options gets extended for our Civilian Persona. Kind of want our MC to have some style outside of their Alter Ego too.
Edit 3: Gauntlet is spelled wrong in the gauntlet flair options.
If I bring weapons back. Iām not sure, since that isnāt my focus yet, I havenāt figured out what all Iām going to be doing with that.
I didnāt have my editor look through this new stuff, so my fault. Iāll look through it and see if I can figure out what the error were. There is a lot of code in there for the different power options so it might take awhile without specific examples.
Iāll look into this. Thank you.
I wasnāt planning on including clothing for the civilian persona.
Thatāll be fixed in the next update.
