Author already answered that.
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I dont do tumbler but thanks.
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not everyone likes to use tumbler or patron^^ but good to know thanks
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Woohoo, you’re back, author! I’m reading the update already!!
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I found a little writing mistake when we go shopping with Koda:
He eyes peer into yours with equal attention. = Should be: His eyes peer….
The same page:
his voice have grown husky… = Should be ‘His voice grown husky’ because of the beginning of the sentence.
That was a wonderful update, I especially love the scenes with Koda and Liam. I hope we can meet Liam again soon. Vincent and Taylor are amazing as well. I love Nana, she’s such a good mother/grandmother 
@MaGran finaly got a chance to play the update and I loved seeing more and the little changes I noticed in the older sections. Looking forward to seeing what you give us next and how the bar job will go. Being a bar I cant help but think we might have hunters naturally come to it.
It’s so pretty!! I love the lighting 
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Thanks for pointing it out, I’ll make sure to change it when I make the next update.
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Glad you liked it!
Regarding the bar: It’s not an unreasonable thought…
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This update was amazing! I love this story so very much! Super excited to see you back!
Lovely story! I picked up an editing issue here or there, but forgot to screenshot lol. I was quite into the story 
I like how down-to-earth the characters are. It really fits the story. It feels like a very personal story, character-centric. I hope the stakes’ll raise a bit more as the chapters go on, having some sort of villain instead of some faceless hunters. There’s some fluff that could be trimmed I think, or incorporated into serving the story a bit more. Particularly, I’m thinking of the chapter where you go clothes shopping. I really enjoyed it! Haha, and I understand that it’s there to give breathing room after the action-packed intro, introduce the town and establish characters. But it feels just a bit too much like fluff? Maybe I’m just too much of a plot focused reader 
I wish there were a bit more choices throughout the demo so far. Maybe during clothes shopping, you could give some choices to define your clothing? Perhaps more ability to pick your response during dialogue? It feels really natural to read, so I dunno lol
Anyway, super promising IF so far. I love the option to not allow ourselves to be touched. I’m building up my character to only allowing touch by L 
I couldn’t be more hyped for a reunion
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This story so far is so good?? Like, Iove every single character so far, the way they interact woth each other and with MC, the lore is interesting and the ROs are so interesting???
Tho, I think Im in love with Ducky lol, he has no rights to be this cute, awesome, funny, gentle and good person. No one can be this perfect 
sonce we can’t romance him (SAAAAAAAADDDD) I’m going to hug him every single time I have the option and opportunity, pls, let us hig best boy cause damn he deserves all the love
Patpatpatpat
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