What type of signals were you expecting … perhaps a blown kiss across the room followed by coy fluttering of the lashes? Or perhaps you wanted a come-hither finger-crook and a little bump of the rump to round things out?
I was hoping for maybe a smile or a frown or something just to show something…instead nothing, just Alex saying something I wasn’t really paying attention to him
She corrects a boy, saying she’s his sister instead. Also relationship goes down, but if a girl says they’re girlfriends it goes up. Alex just said it’s sweet, that’s all. I guess you and I are markedly opposite when it comes to him
Well, time for an in-depth “review”. @ParrotWatcher, I give my wholly unique endorsement that you may toss my MC from a ledge–ribbons over arse, maim le boyfriends, and be as actively dark as a black hole as long as I can continue to surpass stunning with my purple hair, eyes, flames, and Hawke persona. It might seem that I am suspiciously easy to please with so little, (why, 'tis not as if I relate such a sentiment to all authors who offer such options…teehee), yet my shallowness does have its advantages. It also must be known I am not the usual admirer of all things super-heroic, and yet fancy power-driven WIP, there I seem to be. Now an avid CountdowntoWorld’sEndWatcher once SamMC is free to sail off to the moon atop love-fueled crutches.
I’m having choked sobs right now because this is so nice but the demo is short right now D: You know, wildly red hair always reminds me of two defenders of justice with tragic background. Uh, anyway, I always love a good superhero concept, especially ones that reference comic books!
Oh, you know, I didn’t think of this before (I was distracted ), but I just realized about the new scene at the end… the cutie’s parents don’t appear to be doing anything during the hostage crisis? Glancing over the only thing I’m spotting is the mother and brother clutching each other. What is the father doing all this time? Was he one of the paralyzed? A line or two referencing the mother and father’s reactions could keep them from seeming entirely apart from the scene without impairing the narrative thrust.
Also I’m still curious if Alex was the guy you were refering to being cautiously optimistic I might like or if there was someone else in store
If this is gonna happen, then please may there be the opportunity to kiss and make it better?