Before starting this story, I was reading a series of narratives that didn’t particularly captivate me with their characters and events. However, this story grabbed me and kept me engaged. The captivating characters, the competitive games, the true personalities of the characters, their tasks, and tennis itself won me over from the start. Before this story, I had never been interested in tennis or anything related to it. Now, after reading it, I realize how intriguing this sport can be, and wow! What incredible games the protagonist played! At first, I really wanted to dedicate myself to a relationship with my best friend, but when I arrived at university, I met the French exchange student and quickly became interested in getting to know that sarcastic guy better. I had good interactions and relationships with my teammates, but nothing distracted me from the French exchange student. I wish more achievements related to him were added, just a suggestion, haha. I should also say that, at this point in the story, I’m wondering if he’ll want a serious relationship or if he’ll continue to string me along, haha. Your writing is good and captivating, and although I chose to skip some scenes that I found a bit drawn out, overall, you’re doing very well and I’m sure I’ll be following you in future updates.
Loved the update. Though I gotta say, the fact that MC’s mother has canonically directed a film with Jackie Chan in it is so funny to me for some reason.
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There’s so much love put into this game, I adore it!
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