Choice of Rebels Part 1 WIP thread

For me its all contrary I found attractive i hateslim as bones men dirty raged and sun burn is less sexy think ever. A hungry almost die by famine probably without a bath in all his life and no toothpaste its the most ugly monster ever. Im a alone girl in a forest with a dirty helot. Probably virgin and Im not scare at all.

Hi totally unknown men dirty i would tell you all my secrets because you ask me to do so.

Also i tell you my name and all my data i never read a fairy tale about what happen girls in forest.

I was reading it like WTF ? this is like Thomas in choice romances 3 . lol he goes hurt my girl in forest.

I was so grateful when i saw i could avoid the kiss.

A 16 noble woman alone in forest with a dangerous looking (personally for me the think most ugly ever) Asking me to admit secrets that could provoke my dead . Like Thomas same detail and like with Thomas no way to avoid admit them you trust them.

OK i don’t buy that like normal when i could end dead. But like i could the ugly traitor he almost confess . I don’t care then i only want there would be a noble romance to have babies for my family in event i die even if he is skinny sun burned like this one . I love white porcelain skin blonde silk hair fair big eyes and delicate facial features (so yeah Breden is all contrary) for give you feedback. I only want babies after all.
edit: I promise don’t post so many complaints seeing Im in totally minority here. But Im not a usual player and like help with feedback.