Blood Legacies (UPDATE 16/05/25| New Demo | 203k words)

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So no unbreakable ice mountains shame but okay

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I know there are two bodies, the problem is the THE. As you speak Portuguese I will show you in Portuguese what you are doing

O THE aqui no inglĂȘs Ă© uma ĂȘnfase, “os lobos estĂŁo devorando dois corpos” Ă© diferente de “os lobos estĂŁo devorando os dois corpos”, no segundo caso existe um destaque nos corpos como se tivessem sidos relatados anteriormente, o que nĂŁo ocorre, por exemplo “Existe dois corpos caĂ­dos na ravina, ao lado existe pegadas perto que demonstram que uma alcateia passou por aqui a pouco tempo, os (dois) corpos nĂŁo parecem ter sido devorados, entĂŁo a alcateia deve ter passado pela ravina antes dos corpos terem caĂ­do”

analisa estĂĄ frase comigo “os corpos nĂŁo parecem ter sido devorados”, por que o “os” aqui Ă© importante? Porque estou dando uma ĂȘnfase que sĂŁo os corpos que eu descrevi anteriormente quando escrevi “Existe dois corpos caĂ­dos na ravina,”

o THE na frase tem o mesmo sentido, mas nĂŁo existe nada que de necessidade da ĂȘnfase que o THE coloca na frase.

leia a frase desta maneira “two direwolves devored two bodies” e como vocĂȘ escreveu “two direwolves devores the two bodies”. Entendeu o que estou tentando dizer?

I’m not very good at Portuguese, I study physics for christ sake, but what I’m trying to say is that there is no reason for the emphasize in this sentence.

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507

ok, this for me makes sense

508

in the new demo i am not able to open the relationship stats

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509

I think it hasn’t been made yet. It’s probably why the error message happens.

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510

in the other option its written WIP but in relationship it not

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511

Loved this new setup.

During ball Hayden was misgendered.

After mothers death, 3 years later, I wanna think you have this planned with bit more details once back at castle? Guessing also the whole not killing versus killing being dealt with too?

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I’m curious, what is your first language? it is Spanish? I’m Mexican

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Hello, and yes, I understood what you meant. I’ll see if I can correct it, I think it’s confusing what was written :sweat_smile: But I’ll correct it. Thanks for letting me know

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The @Christopher_Bull is correct, I haven’t put the percentages in the relationship stats yet, it was my mistake,and I forgot to put the (wip) warning in the option

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515

Hi! Thank you ! Glad you like it, and Yes, in fact there will be some flashbacks to explain two or three events that will be very important, both for the future and for the MC.

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Hi, it’s actually Portuguese (from Brazil). I’m Brazilian.

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I didn’t know there were many Portuguese in the community, I take this opportunity to say again that I love the game you are playing, how your enemies fear you and the forbidden romance with the king’s daughter, and your pet dragon

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To be honest, I didn’t need to make such a big deal about it, I’m just saying it because it’s a common mistake, one that I made until I studied for the ENEM. And let’s say that writing an essay a day leaves certain things in your head.

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loving the new demo. Found a few typos here and there but other than it’s coming together well.

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@King2 @Fandeblacsoul Thank you! And yeah, the king definitely won’t be having much of it :innocent::laughing: but at least Hayden will love having fun with the mc. And I intend to take a look and check these errors (although I imagine they’re already fixed, as I’ve already updated the files. But I’ll take a look) and I hope you enjoy the new updates.

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Don’t worry, it’s fine.:grin: letting me know about these mistakes is great, so I can correct them, which helps a lot.

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Awesome story, looking forward to future updates. I love the fact that the new demo fledges out a lot of the backstory stuff in the old demo. Interestingly, the personality of Hayden seems to have shifted significantly between the two demos. Does this mean there is a complete rewriting of Hayden’s character? Or will Hayden grow from the shy, timid kid in the new demo, to the confident teen we saw in the old demo?

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From what the author spoke so far, it serms that Hayden will grow to be more like the old demo

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