ah finaly its in the forum was waiting for it , saw your wip on dashington and it did catch me pretty much , glad to see you now here 
wish you the best for the wip
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Noticed that in the *label dreamrelfection in the ifs you wrote two times bodysuit together, but in one if, you wrote body suit apart. (To be more clear in the if 'professorknowpast = “unknown” ')
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Minor note, when the POV shifts to people besudes the MC, it should probably say the mc’s name or other third person descriptions of them rather than second person.
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Really enjoyed it, gives me a lot of x23 vibes but with John wick action scenes. Looking forward to more.
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x23? Is this also a choise script game? Or some other media.
Nevermind found myself. You mean the Charakter from Marvel/X-Men
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Yep. I was bit confused why X-23. Knew it was Laura.
Laura maims at best not kills. She also doesn’t teleport. (Well, last time I read her comics years ago anyway.)
But that’s what the facility that made Laura trained her to do, she had an entire scent-based berserk trigger. There was also that entire arc where I forget if it was Scott or the other X-Men leader of the time had that dark assassination squad and Wolverine was super pissed that they were exploiting her like that.
I used the knives so I was very stabby as well. : D I just wanted to say overall I really enjoyed what was here.
I found this wip a month ago I believe and I gotta say I really liked it i was pretty much hooked, and I’ll definitely be following along
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So your talking about Tracker, not MC then. I misread.
Tracker that left us few years ago has the scent ability to trace. MC has high senses but not like Tracker.
WIP UPDATE!!!
Hi Guys,
The demo for Blink has been updated with about 50k words, including code; however, it’s mostly branches, so it will be a lot less in terms of actual gameplay per playthrough.
DEMO LINK
The demo includes the below:
- Vehicle selection
- One of the main paths for the mansion break-in
- A stealth gameplay section (there is a fail state, but it won’t become apparent until the next update)
As always, if there are any issues, please feel free to send them here or on Tumblr.
The next thing I will be working on is the other two paths for the mansion break-in, and hopefully the next update should include both. Then the update after that should include the rest of the chapter, as the events after the break in all flow together, so it might take a bit longer to get that update out.
Thank you, and I hope you all enjoy the new content.
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Enjoyed the update and cannot wait for more!
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I love the update, I’m glad we can knock out the guards in the house, I don’t like killing them. I’m looking forward to more and to see more of the RO’s 
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I havent gone to new update yet. This sounds promising though! Thanks for that input.
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Loved sneaking through. Nice!
No clue what half the vehicles were without looking them up. Speed, off-road, sports, ease of use on the run. Loudness from all but Harleys, they auto loud.
Unsure if selection is necessary or not. I was gonna just select top bike. Turns out to be a ‘scooter’ type. If a chase is gonna happen, thats the least effective getaway bike, best running and porting then.
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Glad you enjoyed the update. A lot of the vehicles I tried to fit into three categories of cool, realistic, and then funny choices. For the bike choices, I kind of just added bikes that I personally love. There’s going to be some fun stuff with the vehicle choices down the line, and hopefully it will get some good chuckles with some of the more inconvenient options.
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How cool would it be if we could super charge or vehicle with our powers.
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The scooter would honestly work perfectly in very crowded areas.
Considering when served time in Korea for example. The only things moving was us military running and out pacing traffic with normal runs. It was weird the few times out distanced a car. The bikes with weighted cargo, is a thing, and they move faster than traffic as well.
That instance is big city traffic. The idea you gave me an image of was similar to that. Granted once out of bigger populations traffic flows way better. Scarier too as the lanes are barely the width of a vehicle. They also ignore emergency vehicles, I may have to add. Its more aggressive driving, staters are more defensive drivers. Even staters big cities are not as aggressive as Seoul was.
At least back in the 90s anyway. Maybe its altered, maybe not. 
They were a young driving nation compared to others. I doubt it changed much.
New York driving wasn’t as bad as I experienced in Seoul. Best take public transit instead to get places. Plus a 15 mile stretch that takes 15 minutes in US took 1 to 2 hours in Korea. Depending on time get out on road. (Outside of cities.)
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Good start dude. Fight scenes and kills were awesome and the story was mostly immersive. Only issue I had with it were the pronoun errors.
Why the F housemate is described to have chest hair. Are they trans or is that some kind of mutation
Nonbinary and born as male. Or they are Genderfluid. Several of GFs can put on whatever and fully pass as whatever they decided upon. If aware of those people? Didn’t describe them as GF but NB to me.