thank you so much!! I know, I have some stuff I need to polish that a few people have pointed out… I just haven’t yet found the time/energy to go do the necessary edits ;-;, but it will be done before the next big update. glad you are enjoying the demo regardless!
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Oh man normally I romance red flag type ROs but you wrote the H scene very good. He is too scary my MC got traumatized and locked her door. I won’t go near him again!!! 
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HDHWNKDB LOL I promise H can be less scary when they don’t think you’re an intruder 
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I am sorry but for this MC of mine it is too late. The freak attacked me with a knife and was laughing at me. No thank you. Really good written psycho! 
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just discovered this through tumblr and i have the hots for A, dear lord i thought R’s flirty tactics would get me but one look from A and im swooning. i am so excited to learn more about this and the choices that adds character to how the mc interact with things is such a nice touch and makes it feel more alive.
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understandable! 
poor MC
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thank you so much!! happy A made you swoon 
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I would have liked a choice were I run away from H instead of just going. And while running falling down and H just laughing.
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H points and laughs
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Just finished the demo and I have to say, I’m really liking it so far! I’m a sucker for a good mystery, and things seem to be pretty sketchy so far 
. The ROs seem really interesting and suspicious, and I like S a lot. Looking forward to more!
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Great demo so far. But seriously something is wrong in my head if I am immediately drawn to Helena… 
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Blond, pale, and pretty??? Could it be… Hector is Alucard!?
Just kidding, but I can’t help imagining him as that certain half-vampire with such description 
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Hi! This WIP immediately piqued my interest and I went in with high hopes. As soon as I started reading those hopes came true! This is such a lovely concept and kind of feels like something out of a horribly unlucky fairytale. One thing that I wasn’t sure about was, when talking to Mrs. Fletcher, you’re only allowed to ask about one of the Blackwood children. Obviously, this can be a good or a bad thing. For example, it holds suspense in the unknown, but it also leaves players a little oblivious. It, however, does indeed create a cool effect of not knowing what you’re going to meet at the Blackwood manor. Thank you so much for doing what you do! I’m sure I will play this over multiple times so that I can romance each of the siblings.
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Really love the demo! S intro is gold XD Poor MC gonna be stuck with 4 totally-not-suspicious nobles in some hauntingly beautiful manor. What will go wrong, I wonder?
Excited for more 
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yey thank you so much!
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Hector does look awfully similar to Alucard so I cannot really blame you
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Omg thank you so much for such a nice feedback. Hopefully you’ll like the rest of the story just as much! “horribly unlucky fairytale”… i might use that ehe
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Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing S’ scene as well and yeah, what could go wrong…?
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- Great pacing / balance of telling and showing
- Interesting, compelling plot
- Cute variety flirting/romance
- Good MC choice and variation
I shall keep my eye on this. Best of luck to you in your future endeavours!
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super late reply, but thank you so much!
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