Fun story so far. Quite enjoyable.
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I’m excited to see this develop! Just finished the demo and I’m loving the writing style so far, keep it up!
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Thank you for the help with typos, I will fix these asap. And I was planning on things changing later on based on which sibling you’ve chosen to ask about. If you make some different choices with Mrs. Fletcher you actually don’t get to ask about the siblings at all, you head out and find info on a whole different topic!
If this becomes too complicated I might change it up, though.
Went through with it indeed! 
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Thank you!
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That’s fair. Some branching later down the line based on earlier choices is always good to have.
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This is a very cool W.I.P! Out of curiosity, what do you think you’ll enjoy writing the most?
The romance!…Or the mystery? :]
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I like atmosphere and variations mc. 
I hope our answer wouldn’t affect the relationship with RO because i like being a cold/stoic and proud or a fiery and irritable.It would be great to have different answer choices for romance. Not the typical brave/shy flirt options, but something for annoying/proud/evil/cold mc.
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Thank you! That is actually a good question. I do enjoy both things a lot, but my favorite thing to write is characters and I love giving them a unique “voice”, so I would lean for romance, maybe?
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I’m glad you like it! I do plan to make the MC engage with ROs in more interesting and complex ways than just “bold” or “shy” reactions. ^^ Romance is the main focus of the story, so I’m planning to flesh it out and make it as varied as possible.
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Oh that escaped all quick tests and random tests I’ve done so far 
thank you so much, I’ll be on it.
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should be fixed, let me know if it is working for you!
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I really, really like it! I’m intrigued by all the siblings and their mysteries.
Does the current WIP end when you leave in the carriage? I’m getting an infinite loading loop there. I recommend maybe putting and end page that says something about having reached the current end of the demo.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Thank you, glad you like it so far! Oof the infinite loading must have been annoying, i really thought it would give a “play again” option in the end… sorry about that 
I will add a message, great suggestion 
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Any guide to get the best outcome?
I wouldn’t say there is any best outcome, just choose whatever you resonate with the most 
Nah. I have played enough WIPs to have a pretty good guess it was the end. But I wanted to check just in case it was a bug and I was missing out!
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Ooooh this sounds like a very cool premise, I’m excited to follow and read more! Cheers!
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I like it so far, it’s very great and well written. Unfortunately for me too, the demo ends when I get into the carriage. I’m really looking forward to the next dates. Good luck.
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Omg! I like it so much! Made my MC to be the clumsy cheerful type ready to provide sunshine and rainbows to the manor, I’m excited on their dynamic with ROs and other staff (if there were any left), especially on H route.
Do you have tumblr? The tumblr guys and gals would eat this up. Its short but holds a lot of potential, I don’t know how but you even made the side characters endearing in their own way! Looking forward to future updates!
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