Apocrypha: The Emanation War

[Szaal]

Okay, I guess I am the one who over-expecting everything and asking stuff of what I thought were spoilers

Heck, I don’t even know Deus Ex that much

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@Pulak_Kumar

The plot point is that government won’t stand a chance against master hackers who’ve learned how to make the most of the Universal Code.

So, frankly speaking, your story’s design-decision… decided that government won’t have much hand on this story, am I right?

I mean, Victoria can’t fight the Majestic 12 by her own, right?

@Pulak_Kumar

The AIs are sentient, can gain fully human forms, and may even be reincarnations of past historical or legendary figures.

Woo… This sounds cool.
Is there any chance we get a living legends in the form of AI?

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@Pulak_Kumar

I’m not very experiences writing fight scenes and I’m worried it may come off as derivative.

Oh, let me lead you to a thread that discuss the topic of combat.

Craft of Writing: Writing Combat

Okay, since the discussion about “Yes/But” went so well, I thought I might start a weekly “craft of writing” thread to discuss a writing topic. And I thought I’d use the “Craft of Writing” tag in the subjects to make them easier to find. And by “Craft of Writing,” I mean the actual writing part of what we do, NOT the coding/stat balancing/stat checking stuff. I think we have TONS of threads about those mechanics. This is more about the prose, and the word choice, and the length of sentences, an…