It didn’t go back to 0 it leveled up to next rank.
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Haha, maybe the goal can be to reach negative 100 with Chase instead 
To elaborate on Cloud’s point, your relationship rank increases by 1 every time you finish a chapter with over 95% in the relationship bar with someone. Then your bar goes back to 0 after each rank increase. Ranks alter your relationship with characters in the story more than the bar itself does.
I’m very happy you’re enjoying it!
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I really enjoy what’s been implemented so far. I was surprised to learn how much of a selfish scumbag Chase really is, but I have enjoyed being hostile to him since lol.
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Haha, that’s awesome! It’s so cool seeing the total 180 reception Chase has gotten compared to the first few updates of the game. His downfall will be studied one day
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What really sealed it for me was him saying something along the lines of “I would’ve tossed you into the orphanage and leave dad to his fate if it meant I could keep being a soldier.” Then he has the audacity to say “I would’ve been sad if something happened to you” after the academy invasion? Nah, I hope you get kicked in the nuts by a Grime lmao.
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I have no idea why that was posted, sorry if anyone thought it was another update of something.
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Uhh Chase is Tsundere boi, he is one that say I love you then punches you in the face, probably like sasuke.
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For the final chapter, a Chase vs Ruth tsundere competition will replace the battle tournament, who’s interested???
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I hate Chase because of him I didn’t get answer from Ruth and my shy MC will never have enough courage to ask her again.
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How bout… we exclude Chase, win the the tournament, then have Ruth fan girl us instead. 
Hi, in the begining of the story :
- main character 8 years old
- chase the brother 13 years old
so story go to + 5 years it should be :
- main character 13 years old
- chase the brother 18 years old
chase should be 18 not 25 years like the story says. Or is this story about time travel or shapeshifters ?
Sorry but this miscalculation bug me. Or did i find something to early ?
@Cloud845 @Ghast Maybe the better idea is to make the next game called Anti-Chase Academy
@JoshiYinmith I looked back and couldn’t find where I put that information in the story. I did find a discrepancy on Chase’s age where it suggested he left to become a soldier at 18 years old when it was really 19 and that’ll be fixed for the next update. Chase is 11 years older than the main character. So Chase was 19 and the MC was 8 when Chase left. 5 years later, Chase is now 24 and the MC is 13.
There’s likely a lot of contradictions in the first 2, maybe 3, chapters because I was still figuring out the story at the time and changed my mind a lot. I’m waiting to finish the first draft and fix any plot holes in the second draft, but I appreciate any mistakes brought up to me. I’ve added the age problem to my notes so I don’t forget to keep an eye out for it, thank you!
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Find another thing. When play at competition Class A vs Class C. Brother Chase first speak about class B :
“All right, we’ll have Class B tell their truths and lie first!” Chase claps his hands again excitedly. “Go ahead and pick your opponent! Let’s get started.”
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I take a few minute out of the story to be in shock after the 4 wall breaking.
The story doesn’t say a thing about the Main Character childhood. No hint, no even a tought about the family connection nothing. AAO visit through me out the story. This revelation should be hinted at the begining or some missing baby in picture… Chase physic anything that don’t tell the author write this clue out the blue.
Oh by the way i enjoying the story so far 
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You’re completely right! It did feel a little forced and random even as I was writing it, but I wasn’t 100% sure. It’ll be better to add the (Ch. 5 spoiler) MC being adopted information earlier and more fluidly. Thanks for the feedback, added it to the notes as well!
Also fixed all Class A-C errors for the 2 truths one lie game, so no more confusion there 
Glad you’re enjoying the story!
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I will continue to report things i find 
After the mutant attack (still don’t understand all the situation at this point) i came to read this :
"The good news is that the mutant attack occurred solely inside Ant-Mutant Academy; there were no reports of mutants anywhere else within Gallandor.
"
Ant ??
till next time.
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i am looking forward to this !!!
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After the battle with the mutant i check the stat and get ??? with 24% (the level of affection)
it suppose it should be written Cassen Tucker. Is this because of the dream …
if it not an error it well done. That let think of many
possible future.
hospital bed :
“Gross. [MC NAME] is just going to get cockier the longer we stay here. Pretty sure that’s our cue to leave.” Ruth is the first to lead the way out."
The error there is that i choose Ruth to stay with me. She can’t leave and be in the room at the same time. Maybe make everyone out and let the player choose the rest ? (chase… 
hope in later of the adventure u can kill him omg).
When big forehead enter the room 
i choose the option to embrace him, but the Mc is paralyze in a bed when big forehead just enter the room. Maybe let him make step into the room before the choice; space are important.
Before i forgot this one : So far (begin of chap5) the story don’t retain any space marker, agenda for studients, or season that mark the year. This maker of time are important to the reader to let him now where the story is and as i understand one book is one year, so those seasons seem no brainer for me. it just a sugestion.
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I’m glad you still keeping this project alive. Good for you, I’ll be rooting for you. Big fan of your game.
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After the demo i have some pointers.
I feel that the story move too fast, the universe is here the locations but didnt experience munch in term of story. The MC just fast travel (how many intermissions ?) into the end.
How about the safe code ? this got away too fast before the end come.
Maybe like in harry potter wink, wink, the story need to finish all mysteries (safe code, psycho brother, visite around town, sleep outside your home…) and move out.
That will leave the reader/player with sense that a year pass and will make it easy for the next adventure (book).
That was a really long demo thanks for the sneak peek.
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