New draft!
Changelog includes:
- the usual assorted typos, exposed code, and minor points of confusion fixed
- More terms added to the glossary. If you would like more, please say so!
- Achievements! Please test them to see if they’re working
Specific continuity and story edits:
Ch 4
- If you stayed at Selim’s place at the end of Ch 3, you are still there at the beginning of Ch 4
Ch 5
- Fixed continuity of whether the PC has a friend on the outside helping them or not
Ch 6:
- Added more direct dialogue + interaction with Selim, and a chance to start a romance
- Smoothed out transition between leaving Fadl’s apartment and going to talk to Kamal
- Fixed continuity of conversation with Kamal
Ch 7:
- If you bring someone with you to return the gems, there’s a chance to start a romance with them
- Fixed (we hope!) the continuity of the planning conversation regarding whether Alia has met Kamal before
- If you haven’t met Batates yet, you definitely meet her in this chapter. And she is a VERY good dog.
Ch 8
- If you go to the vault first and fail, the transition from one location to another is now clearer
- Fixed continuity bug (I hope!) where Kamal would disappear mid-scene
Ch 9:
- Reworded and otherwise edited choices in the escape sequence to clarify which stats they’re testing, and to make them more balanced statwise
Ch 10
- fixed some reversed true/falses to correctly account for Alia being captured or not
This is version 66608