thank you sm !
This really good. I can’t wait to read more
I am enjoying the story of this and telling the idea of an elf and human having a child being taboo and seeing what would come of it and the characters we’re witnessing I can’t wait to see more and what you’re planning and don’t worry English is good it’s better then mine 
Humans and elves. Humans and dwarves, humans and orcs. It’s simple, no children! Mixed bloods of all races must not be born.
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I’m guessing a human a****** made this rule because he or she sounds like a dick I can’t wait to meet them
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Why always a human.
It was a group decision in which the elves have a strong impact if you want to know everything, but the four peoples were well agreed.
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A group decision well this changes nothing I still believe them as dicks and beat the living crap out of them I just hate people who think mixed blood is a bad thing to me it’s a good thing
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This was fun and engaging! I’m so excited for my MC to meet Arthur, it’s gonna be a huge crush plus jealousy for getting to spend so much time with beloved uncle Tobias, I can’t wait!
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Game update 06/01/2022
Hi! It’s an even day, I like even days, so here’s an update.
The new content is not very long, but I’m quite happy with it, especially since it precedes the arrival of not one, but two Ro. Chapter two is now over 6000 words including code.
In the meantime, here is what you can do
-Be mean to Cecily
-Be mean to Cecily
-Be mean to a stranger
-Talk to the voice in your head
-Witness a big lie.
I hope you like it and I can’t wait to write the rest of this chapter and bring it to you.
https://dashingdon.com/play/daugtherofolympus/adoriels-tears/mygame/
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You read my mind!
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Just read your story, I like it so far, I assume the demo ends when that person asks if I am her daughter, I get an error when I chose it hurts.
@Zenobrighter @Mistyleaf123 Hi !
Weĺl it’s weird. You should be able to go a little further after this choice. I have checked and there should be no problem with the code. Maybe if you restart the game it will work? 
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nice update. its short but establishes more on how the mc feels about always having to be a hidden from everyone.
small typo
they have
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Love this. Also your English is very good
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OK will try again in the morning.
Hey i just saw the comments that came just before mine and I made it past the choice shown in the screenshot from @Mistyleaf123 so I think you’ve fixed the issue
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Yup managed to get past that part of The story, look forward to reading more, I am British and I will admit your written English is alot better than many British I know.
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This game looks really good! I feel like I’m going to like it a lot!
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Thank you so much ! 
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