A Witch's Path (WIP)

Well, here you go:

I just like the bold ones. And goth fashion, too.

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Lol then you will not enjoy how she shows your MC her powers :sweat_smile:

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Eeeeep! hides with Katie Save me!

Well, immortal boy just gets better and better… Oh, God, he’s not straight, is he? (Because that seems to be happening a lot to me… :disappointed:)

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All the characters are basically Bi so no matter if your preferences you can go for any or all of them.

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@OracleD3 - It is my belief that showing art based on your cannon characters and locations is a good thing to do. The reasons why you want to do this is to communicate with your readers where your writing is coming from and going.

Your readers will always make headcannon versions of your characters and aspects will be different (ie hair color) and that is o.k. By showing your art, you can communicate where you as an author are coming from and that can be important for people to understand your storyverse.

It would be different if you were forcing your version on people and saying their headcannon is wrong but since you wouldn’t be doing that then I think there is more benefit then downside to showing your art. Besides, I like and admire people who can draw and visually present a picture - that is something I can’t do.

Like @Sammysam I like the Goth girl.

Poor @ParrotWatcher :disappointed:

Poor @Lizzy too. :heart:

@ParrotWatcher @Lizzy @Eiwynn

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All the characters are basically Bi so no matter if your preferences you can go for any or all of them.
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We know, the comments of condolences are more of a historic thing :smiley:

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I think Katie seems pretty boring at the moment. Need to see the characters in action first, but right now I’m only really digging Jane and Solem. Maybe because it looks like he’s on borrowed time lol. Didn’t see pushover with Aziza at all, though I find it odd a teenager’s considered wise. I kinda like her because my favorite color’s purple.

I didn’t get rough bad boy from Dante, though I can appreciate a selfish slacker. I like naps too. Maybe this is just in my head, but as an aside, I think most fiction with opposing groups are different genders (Like in Lost Girl: the Morrigan and whoever it is that’s in charge of the Light Fae.) Which is me saying I wanna see Aziza be leader instead of Abel…She’s wise, right?

I think it’d be cool if the cousins (Aziza and Able/Abel?) were in different Covens, but that’s just my throwaway opinion. To be honest, I’m a little bit disappointed that the White Coven kids seem more “good” than the Black Coven ones. Not a fan of black/white morality. (A lot of anti-blackness uses this in its language, though I’m not saying that’s what’s happening here. I don’t think that all. Just why I especially don’t like it.) Maybe my eyes glazed over a character that contradicts this, but I wish the White Coven weren’t so pollyanna and Black weren’t, I dunno, troublemakers and assholes.

These are just opinions.

She and my MC aren’t gonna be friends if that’s how it is :relaxed:

Well so far I think Dante would be good friend, but not boyfriend material. It is a shame that of our age-mates only the two girls are in fashion club, as that would be the after school activity my mc would naturally gravitate to, now that he finally has the looks to pull off fashionable clothing very well.
I hope the final two boys will be better as anime club would so not be my mc’s thing and Nate seems too straight anyway.

Meh, different strokes for different folks. I’ll be waiting on the reveal of the two final boys.
Thus far I think my mc would like Dante and Jane to hang out with, putting him firmly on the dark side in the Night Coven. Thus far none of the boys have screamed perfect boyfriend material to me yet, here. So it’s either gonna be one of the final two boys or the human love interest for my mc.

Amelia will probably be my first ro, she seems like a kindred spirit.

Of course. Because if he’s not straight, he’s doomed. :sob:

This seems like an interesting idea; it may be a little cliched to have the two leaders be opposite genders, but on balance of probabilities, it’s not unlikely. (That said, I’m rather surprised that Dante would be bothered with being the team leader; it seems like it’d be too much work.)

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Oh nooo, that too, but I meant because of the people on the thread who want to murder him. He’ll be as safe as anyone else in your playthrough! I think.

I think if Abel and Aziza’s “positions” were flipped that’d fix @idonotlikeusernames’s fashion thing too. Put Abel in fashion club and make Aziza leader. Boom. It’s a cliche I’m down for, honestly. I guess these clubs are important for a mom to intervene so much.

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I think Dante takes a rather Jeffersonian view towards the (student) government. As in: “That government is best which governs least.” :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

But Abel sounds boring, (as he’s currently written as student council) to be in fashion club he’d need to let the more fabulous side of his personality come out, or otherwise he’d just be “designing” identical and very conservative boring business suits all the time. :unamused:
It would also force my mc to make hard choices between the girl who seems fun, Jane and the only other guy his age in fashion club. :worried:

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I think the solution to that would to make him less boring lol. (I dunno if this is better but it’s what I thought of) Like, okay, there’s his boy scout persona and that’s what he puts forth for people because of family pressure, but here he is “accidentally” maybe or because his cousin/someone “forced” him and he insists on suits but oh look, he sure spends a lot of time with the silks and sequins. Then the player can choose whether they want to help him loosen up and be open about his fabulous self or whether they want to ignore him for Jane or just focus on fashion and he’ll remain the same. That makes sense because he’s black and there’s a certain type of masculinity that’s demanded in a lot of communities/homes. (My mom really tore down my male twin for when he tried to learn knitting, among other things.) (Though I’m not saying black people are the only ones to be weird about masculinity at all.)

Pluss, this could just be me, but I think a lotta characters come off as boring-ish archetypes when authors present their preliminary descriptions. Then you get into the story/game and they (hopefully) shine.

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Hmm…well it isn’t my kind of style exactly but a lot of Black men, mostly musicians are quite fabulous already, even if it’s just in the trend that mr. T started in overdoing the covering themselves in jewelry. Though Usher in leather was one of my celebrity crushes at one time.
Black men are in fact in large part responsible for the current incarnation of “bling”.



Now many African-American men tend to wear their pants (and the rest of their clothes) a bit baggier than I’d perhaps like to see, but their “hyper-masculine” (sub)culture doesn’t necessarily prevent them from having style and flair.
Although Abel being in the White Coven who are not allowed to use their “magic” for “fun” things like actually being able to afford the more expensive materials (fine leather is still very expensive after all and let’s not even speak of fine jewelry) may cramp his style too, particularly where “bling” is concerned.

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That sounds far less boring than before (although I really don’t think black people have a monopoly on enforced masculinity :sweat_smile:). I’d still be going for Solem first, though. (Nate would definitely be last.)

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Well Nate is a curious case, normally I like pranksters, hell some of my characters are pranksters themselves. However given this mc’s history I think the poor guy would have a difficult time (at least for the first couple of months of his new life) distinguishing between friendly pranks and another round of bullying.