I gotta high five you simply for being blunt and straight to the point. 
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Yeah I mean he steals my girl and I am supposed to like him?
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how dare you not liking someone who steals your girl, are you not a cuck?
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Where does the update end?
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My only issue thus far, whilst trying to get thru Chapter 2 again.
The word â,yeahâ coming up in multiple characters. Its unrealistic to have so many using it. Not only two using it, they all use it. Itâs weird that everyone uses â,yeahâ a LOT.
This is what stopped me from finishing chapter with the actors and the play.
â,yeahâ needs edits. Few are ok, but not every person?! Either cut it from few or change yeah to â,rightâ for couple.
Its weird conversation line for ALL to use â,yeahâ.
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Think there is a blaster increase missing here in chapter 1
#I need a long range option as well, and I can barely handle my energy powers. I should focus on that.
And so you do. You join Ignis and Latâs sessions, though you donât get quite as much time as Lat does to train.Still, what you get is undeniably helpful. Ignis teaches you to better direct your energy flow, how to avoid having your arms 'soft-lock', as she puts it, when you fire, and how to shoot while flying. Ignis even mentions you might be able to create other shapes beyond bolts at some point, though it's still a way off, according to her. You also get some target practice, in the shape of Aki and Seeker. You don't hit the former very often, and the latter not at all, but it still helps you prepare. Of course, the days shoot past as well. *page_break
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Ironic too, given your username HarleyQueen and a profile picture of Harley Quinn from her animated TV show, since Harley more or less is the Seeker in this dynamic. Considerably worse, even, considering how Harley and Ivy have sex just days before Ivyâs wedding to Kite Man â something that regardless of oneâs opinions, is indisputably cheating. Which is something that Ignis and Seeker have not and would not ever do, per the authorâs own words.
In other words, you might as well have a username of SeekerKing and Seeker as a profile picture. The same kind of forgiveness can be given to both.
It can be natural to dislike a character as a perceived romantic rival in a fictional story; no oneâs asking you to like him. But Ignis never belonged to you, or to any character. At some point itâs better to put the vitriol down. Romance Lat for a change, for instance, if you donât want to see this piece of Ignisâs story through to the end. She literally has more (and better) romantic content than Ignis. Call for more ways to ignore and lash out at Seeker in future chapters, if you want. But better to do it from a place of calm and not a place of anger.
Yeah, I can kinda see where youâre coming from, though it comes with the territory of the entire League being a bunch of zoomers and young millennials (like the author), with the gap between the youngest alleged ages (us, Lat, and Aki) to the oldest alleged age (Seeker) is just 6 years. So yeah, the wordâs just there because everybodyâs pretty casual and non-confrontational.
Iâd like to tell you that the percentage of total word count that âyeahâ takes up drops off after Chapter 2, where it currently sits at around 0.15%, but it increases to about 0.2% in Chapter 3, then 0.3% in Chapter 4, drops back down to 0.1% in Chapter 5, and somehow returns to 0.15% for Chapter 6, Part 1. So there may still be a bit much for you.
I think the idea of dropping in some "right"s is a good one, though. If this were spoken, Iâd also probably recommend an affirmative grunting sound, but thatâs, uh⊠not easy to write.
Yeah, dw, it wasnât as bad as you might think. VS Code already gives me the word counts for each chapter, and I can just Ctrl-F to see how many times the word âyeahâ appears. The exact percentages are slight underestimates relative to the in-game reading experience because the code is included, but for the purposes of comparing across Chapters (e.g. whether it gets âbetterâ for them after Chapter 2), we only particularly care about the ratios between chapters.
You step forward then. Nova fixes his sights on you, but youâre not getting cut off. Before he can speak, you tell him what you decided on before you started flying here.
It should 404 after that.
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Wait, did you actually run an analysis on that? 
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Gods, why? The man knew about Gloriaâs plan to incite the terrorist attack and went along with it. Thatâs a permanent irrevocable place on my shitlist.
My problem with Gloria isnât that heâs competent (in fact, Iâm pretty sure heâs gonna fuck up royally and make things worse for everyone, catastrophically so), itâs that heâs an evil little shit (and you agree with this assessment, because you just metaphorised him with Cheney) whoâll get innocents murdered for a photo op.
Stoffs, including stoffs from the earlier chapters that I picked up only now
Man, not being able to name save game slots is gonna be a BUGGER. 
Capitalised pronoun.
UNcapitalised pronoun.
âongoingâ is just one word.
Extra inverted commas.
On the multiple meet-ups in Chapter 4, you can still loop endlessly if you want. Not sure itâs worth the trouble of changing that, but just so you know.
I swear to god, Señor Cuevas, if you donât do a POV switch or otherwise let me hear this convo when the time comes, Iâm rioting.
Neener neener, fuckers.
âlatter of whomâ
I dunno, Gabby, Iâve met some fathersâŠ
Hi, Iâm requesting a âwhy not both?â option here, kkthxbai.
I think Gabby has been told what to do way too much already, she certainly doesnât need this extra âtoldâ in this sentence.
Nooooooo, the cliffhanger. 
Iâd say this is great, but you just cliffhangered me AT THAT POINT, so
(I kid, I kid⊠mostly. Happy holidays, Juan!)
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Yknow it amuses me that Seeker gets the hate. If I was going to be mad at anyone, I would be mad at Ignis. She is clearly the more cognizant of the two regarding her feelings for the other, and she is the one who enters into a relationship with the MC despite actively pursuing Seeker seconds before. Literally Seeker has done nothing so far but stand there and be the target of someone elseâs affections. He clearly cares for Ignis, but he doesnât pursue her romantically, and indeed actively shuts down such advances in Chapter 2.
Seeker isnât stealing your girl, your girl is in love with another man. (Also sheâs not your girl, youâve known her for like two months women have their own agency etc)
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To be blunt none of the people in charge have earned my trust one is a dumbass with the ego on par with a certain real life prez but letâs not bring in irl politics and the other is a shady fecker that as one person has already mentioned was willing to have a photo op detailing mass slaughter cuz why tf not. Also Mars needs to stop trusting tweedle dumbass and his successor Iâll allow a massacre to happen if it helps my shady plans.
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They both suck tbh, Ignis for encouraging MCs affection and Seeker because heâs Seeker. Also Lat or Aki is right there, whoâs seriously going after Ignis?
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Me chasing after the techboy Nova because he exists and I like techies plus he is cocky but can back up his words.
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I totally agree with you, but Lat is just in the bestie zone, and Aki gives me little sister vibes. Iâll let Ignis break my MCâs hurt for the angst. If Iris is a G then Iâll go down that route but otherwise, Iâll just keep my MC a single pringle.
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Agreed Aki gives little sister that needs to be protected vibes and Lat is a bit much for my main mc tbh so eternal bestie zone for her, gonna be after a certain techboy for the entire game.
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Iâm playing a single Pringle too, Seeker and Forlorn are the only characters Iâm interested in, so of course theyâre not romanceable 
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From my knowledge. Seeker wonât ever be. Forlorn on the other hand will be in the next book.
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That gives me hope.
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Forlorn romance will be peak; Iâm very excited (though I doubt itâll displace my current preference towards Nova). Heâs so emotionally repressed and linked to many of the central mysteries of the plot, and heâs adorable too.
âIwanttoapologize,â he whispers quickly, almost too quickly for you to catch, in fact.
âWhat?â
âApologize,â he whispers again, this time slower. âAbout how I treated you earlier, I mean. It was uncalled for. Youâre new at this, and I shouldnât be giving you a hard time over it.â
âOh, wellâŠâ
âI know getting used to the whole hero thing can take a while, but you showed you have some of the stuff it takes earlier today. Good job.â
Also, to put things in perspective, Forlorn hasnât called us by our real name once this entire game.
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I know, heâs playing hard to get and I like it 
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