A Mage Reborn, Book Two (WIP) - UPDATED April 5th, 2025 | Book One Released!

Heh, I doubt Saine would enjoy that. I really do hope for a ruler ending featuring ourselves, though. Talk about a full circle. Although if a Leaf’s End epilogue is possible with Eli or maybe even a chosen RO, that would be absolutely bittersweet and the best ending for any mage, in my opinion.

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My MC‘s opinion on everything would be:

Leon: I don‘t hate you but pls don‘t talk to me
Ilya: Can I still Fck you?
Saine: Good Friend
Param: Don‘t ask for my help* but I won‘t try to destroy you either (If it‘s an end of the world scenario I shall)

Tahlia: If I can escape and is no longer under your control I WILL CHOP YOUR MOTHER FCKING HEAD OFF!
Flyss: You hate me? I despise you
Yurui: You seem nice don‘t go to Arcadia tomorrow.
Arcadia: it‘s a shame you died but with how your leader I wish you were truly dead

Eli: if he is at least scratched by anyone even Eli they will all die

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My MC is pacifist almost all the way but would go berserk if you piss him off enough or threaten one of their loved ones. How was the saying? ‘‘Beware the wraith of the quiet man’’ or something? I wonder if the game can bring him to despise Flyss and Tahlia enough to actually do something to them :thinking:

I just know that if he has to choose between Yusuha (and Eli by extension) and his friends well… You better start running bro :hocho:

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simply exceptional work

wish you all the best and looking forward to reading the finished product!

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Bruh…I hate that spy(forgot the name)…I am talking about that girl who was keeping watch on the mc and reporting to Leon…She is the only reason the mc died…She even stopped Ilya from saving the mc…I just wanna see that spy suffer…Was she a spy… Idk😐

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@Ashten lol she is the spy master for the kingdom of param as for her name it’s ante

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That reminds me, our Phantasma power isnt supposed to be lethal? I dont understand how she shows up if you go with Ilya when you attacked her with it before

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I wonder if the other unused phantasma will be stripped from the MC?

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Naw…getting rid of the other parasites would make the mc far too powerful. I mean don’t get me wrong, it would be a dream come true for my mc if he could get rid of the parasites while keeping his ability to do magic and not risk something that may well amount to suicide in a bid to get rid of the useless parasites…but I wouldn’t count on it being that easy.

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magic this world is like blood in this world if us it for long time it might kill you I that parivir said when ask because how oc feel when they us it I think so in my eye oc magic kill them when doing it on how there body feeling when doing it

Getting Eli back should help.

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With the authority granted to me by absolutely no one, I proclaim thee: Grand Master of Spirit Crushing Cliffhangers.

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No, I shall give you that authority as my right as a random commenter

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Like your meaning when I look up Leon I don’t look at him as the villain or the murderer he’s just a leader of a country that has to follow the will of the people if you didn’t there might be a revolution and a civil war because our character killed a pretty much popular religious figure he had no other choice but to get it over with and my MC I believe understood this did not regret loving him and cared about him

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Random question, but was the demo updated on Oct 20th or August 20th? Is the pic below pertaining to the current version or the version that came before?

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It’s the 20th October it was updated, that’s most likely a simple mistake, nothing serious

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Thanks! just making sure.

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Time for bad jokes how cook are you I say very cooked how is it feel to be Resurrected I feel intense burning of passion there’s my bad jokes for today in the Mage reborn weirdly enough I feel better now for letting that out because I was saving in so badly

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Question, does anyone else felt moved to tears how heart wrenching this story can be. I did a new play through today. And when I get to the part of my MCs death after the dungeon scene I cry, when my MC is reunited with Eli I feel happy tears, and now the new ending part for the story so far has me in sad tears especially Ghisan’s story and then Augur and his sister Araile story. :sob: :sob: :sob: Thanks again @Parivir for such a fantastic read. :clap:



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I feel your pain that was nothing but sadness I had stop reading when stop crying

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