This, honestly, is one reason I freaking hate that golden-haired prick. There are a lot of things I can overlook, but lack of loyalty isn’t one of them. You don’t watch someone go through the shit the MC went through–selflessly, I might add–then screw them over the way Leon did. You don’t come back from that.
Loyalty breeds loyalty. Betrayal breeds betrayal. And, after replaying b1 and getting my character solidified, there’s no way in hell Leon can work his way back into her good graces. She is selfless and loyal, but she’s no doormat. Betray her–torture her and turn your back on her like Leon did–and you will reap the fucking whirlwind (amusing since I ended up naming her Aella, which literally means “whirlwind”). And anyone who stands in her way to take him down will be turned to ash.
Agreed. And his little whiny episode of sitting in his room for a couple of weeks doesn’t undo what was done. Nothing can undo the inhumane torture he put the MC through. If some MCs want to trust him again and let it go (and somehow managed to escape without suffering PTSD from the torture), that’s their business. For me and my MC, however, that won’t and can’t happen.
Like you said elsewhere, the way Leon treated the MC is how you treat someone you wanted to dispose of all along and were looking for a good reason to do so. And, honestly, that fits with Leon’s behavior from the beginning–use the MC to help achieve his goals, then murder her because she’s too dangerous. Of course, I think he’s too stupid to plan that far ahead…
And I can’t freaking wait for it to happen. When Aella is done with Leon’s ass, she’ll deal with Thalia, who will have one chance to show she is better than the asshole king.
Exactly how my MC feels. Whatever the circumstances, Thalia is not yet on her shit list. If nothing else, Thalia has given her another chance to live, and to seek revenge on the bastard who betrayed her and threw the love she had for him back in her face.
I think that’s all the MC ever was to him.
Exactly so. For my MC, it’s not even about a worldview. Things, for her, are much more personal than that. She fights for personal reasons (the trees, not the forest) and is loyal to individuals, not institutions or nations.
So, for her, being brought back means she can right a wrong that was done to her, something unforgivable. She will remove the boy king. She couldn’t give less of a shit who takes the throne after that, but he has to die. As does Ante. As for the people of Param, they made their bed when they turned on her. She doesn’t put her torture at the foot of everyone there, but neither will she ever bleed for them again. Those in Param who showed her loyalty–Saine and Ilya–will keep hers. Everyone else? Fuck 'em.