Avast ye Captain Nine! This one be not a scurvy landlubber but seasoned seadog! An’ I’ve espied a couple things… Which means ye got yerself some es’plainin’ ta’ do…
*Ahem* *Yar, Yar* *Ahem*
Item Number One on Me List:
“You breathe in the sweet smell of the ocean sea spray and crinkle your nose at the acrid smoke from the decks below.”
Ocean sea spray is annythin’ but sweet (ye’d know that if ye weren’t a scurvy landlubber! Jus’ kiddin’, anyway… ). A cake is sweet, a pastry is sweet, ‘oney is sweet, a plum is sweet, ocean spray? It’s slightly salty smellin’ , cold, and most importantly it’s fresh smellin’ too.
Item Number Two on Me List:
I feel pretty unattached to the characters, because there’s nary any screen time for ‘em. I’d like ta’ feel that either they’re me worst enemy, or they’re me closest rum buddy, or maybe they’re summat a tween the two. Speakin’ o’ characters I’d like ta’ see summore of ‘em, like Arrrgh! classmates, (see what I did there?) what are they like? An’ the sailors/ traders, any that stand out from the crowd? An’ more importantly… any of 'em have some rum?
Item Number Three on Me List:
Needs more rum.
Item Number Four on Me List:
Where be my grog?