Yes, sorry! It got pushed into Chapter Two and should be up in a few days
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Can’t wait 
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Thank you, and it’s fixed now! I forgot to reupload that file XD
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Well interesting so far, the nightmares gave me goosebumps, will keep an eye on this.
Thank you so much! 
This is really well-written. Won’t have much else to say before I have a better understanding of wtf is going on probably lol
I see that you put “Elphaba” as one of the default names
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Thank you! Haha, yeah, I’m working on a better summary. XD
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haha, yes!, i tried to make the default vanes focused on fictional witches and wizards
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And the chapter two update is live! I may end up rearranging a few things still, but so far I’m pretty satisfied with it and hope you all enjoy meeting both River and Alice properly. I also edited the main post a lot, added some character info, etc.
At this time I’m looking primarily for bugs, and if there are options you feel like are missing or are too similar to each other, etc. Also mixed up pronouns.
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Sorry about that! I must’ve switched up the files somehow, but I reuploaded and they’re working for me.
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It’s okay 
I tried know, everything works now, I will finish to read this and I will write my opinion
Fixed, and thank you!
This WIP is awesome 
It’s easy to read it, and the writing is so good.
This is my opinion, u can read it, and then, do whatever you want 
im not a professional writer, just a random person from the forum 
Plot
The plot is so interesting, I like the idea of the supernatural worlds, fantastic creatures, magic (not magic, like Harry Potter, please)…
Characters
I think that the MC haven’t meet anyone of the 3 characters who have the red relationship stats, so I can’t talk about my opinion of them 
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I like that u wrote (under Alice and the other person) how they feel about the MC 
Will you add more characters aside the Ros? And there will be only 4 ROs (just curious)
Found a bug, I think that it appears, when u choose the first option, the lie.
This isn’t a bug, just a question, the option who u can’t choose, are like this because the MC relationship with Alice or because it isn’t avaliable??
English isn’t my first language, sorry if I wrote something wrong 
Looking for future updates I will comeback
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Thank you so much for all your help with the bug hunt! I got that fixed, too. And to answer your questions:
The three people with the red stats haven’t been met yet, no. The Stats page in general is very much a Work In Progress, showing off a few things that likely won’t be there in the final cut. (like the numeric stat, I’m probably just going to keep relationship stats as “Alice thinks of you as…” text dialogue.)
There will be only four ROs, to keep things simple on that end, but there will be other side characters in the long term. (Some of whom have already shown up, besides Alice ;D)
And the “Old Hag” option has to do with the Angry/Melancholy stat. I should perhaps say more about that in the overview, but that stat in particular plays a BIG role on the backend of things, and opens up or closes off certain dialogue choices. If you’re a super angry MC you can try calling her that. Though, you could input it yourself if you really wanted it with the “I’ve got a perfect idea” option, you just won’t get to see her reaction.
And your english is perfectly fine, no worries about that!
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Thank you for answering 
I agree that there will be only 4 ROs, just wanted to know it 
About the “old hag” option, I really didn’t want to call her that, I was just curious why the other options weren’t choosable, For me, she seems okay, I don’t see why my MC has to be an asshole with her, cuz she’s giving MC food and a place to live 
Ahhh~ I was confused, I didn’t know that the melancholy/angry stat would affect to the option and some of them would be unavailable.
I have seen many WIPs and in my opinion, the second most important think in one of this game are the stats, 
if u want I can give you some ideas that u can add, so the Stats look more complete(?), not working in progress, beautiful(?) Obv, just If you want, is your WIP 
Thank you x2 I’m trying to improve my English, I’m just good at reading (facepalm) and it’s difficult for me to express my opinion in a elaborate way and not just, “I like this and this. End”
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Yup, still enjoying this. Still, ahem, bewitched. 
May or may not have flirted with River… 
Keep it up, @Raebrown . 
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