Speaking of ww1 while something our MCs wont see where they are at I was curious does the nation’s in conflict still field Calvary like the real world counterparts did?
Ok then.
Really great Wip. Very realistic scenes, you instantly get vibes of the environment and the time you are, especially while at the frontier. A really promising beginning, I look forward for the next chapters.
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To a small extent. Though this is the first world war of the setting, technology has progressed further than that. So in the year 1927 we start out in, cavalry would be used, but not to great extents
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Lol no worries was curious how close to the real world the story might have been even with fictional countries and the like. 
since Calvary was used back then before becoming limited to other places after trench warfare took over so much of the European war fronts.
Thank you for the anwser and defintly looking forward to seeing what comes for us next in game.
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I’m very glad you’ve enjoyed everything I have so far! There is a major update coming very soon so just keep an eye out!
Chapter 3 is out! For some reason I cannot update the title to reflect the new wordcount of just over 200k, but I’ll figure that out in the morning.
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I recently achieved the ability to make such changes to other peoples threads lol so I changed the number count for you.
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Such great news! I cannot wait to go home and see the story unfolds before my eyes
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I have find a bug
This happen even if i take the option hide inside the post. I selected Corra as companion and i’m a sniper.
I shotted the enemy earlier.
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Kinda makes me curious as to what choices you selected before those ones. I also was a sniper and chose corral but didnt run into any bugs when going sneaky/cautious mode to the post and inside.
Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I’m 99% sure I just fixed it, but not 100% positive.
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Thank you so much 
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I think the bug is fixed, at least I didn’t had any problems.
The chapter was excellent, as expected. I liked the council and the raw truthes of war;
The soldier whith their face eaten from rats, your best friend died, at the end is all about politics. But two scenes where so ducking strong;
Firstly the king on the window; his philosophical consideration of war, ic it’s worth it for people to die for meaningless things, and the massive difference between the ugliness of war and the peace of the river gives you food for thought.
And of course the crawling to the hearing post, with the andrenaline pumping my heart, as I expect at any second to listen the next bullet fly straight to my MC’s head, I’d amazing.
Thank you very much and keep up the great work
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate your feedback. I’m glad you continue to enjoy the story, and hope you’ll be looking forward to chapter 4 (ETA idk)
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I hope you are all enjoying the release of Chapter 3! I am actively full steam ahead on writing, and chapter 4 is already in the works. I wanted to run a quick poll to see how you all feel about our lovely companions, and see who everyone chose.
Who did you choose to spend time with most?
- Freddie
- The Twins
- Corra
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voters
Who did you choose to accompany you to the post?
- Freddie
- Peter
- Ellison
- Corra
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voters
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Will defintly check out the others given enough time but corra was my choice for the first playthrough of chapter 3. An though its been said by another you did a great job setting the tone of what was happening around the players character as well. As well seeing that council with the king was a good touch to show what was going on with the higher ups.
Though I did notice something that got me to thinking our father is a member of a council im going to assume he is just in the local council? Since he wasnt in the kings council or am I reading into it wrong?
In any case im looking forward to trying a few more playthroughs when I get a chance and seeing what chapter 4 shapes up into.
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I won’t spoil anything, but yes, the father is a part of the Royal Council, not just a local one. There are reasons he was not present at the meeting.
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Error when you reach the hearing post and decide to whether fight or hide from the soldiers
Dawshell2 line 1222: Illegal mixing of spaces and tabs; this line has a space, but there were tabs on line 1221
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Just fixed it, thank you.
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