I reported the bug, sorry if I confused @jaz99hewitt .
In your case, I don’t think so because the demo ends after you defeat Fu Bing, regardless of how you defeat him.
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Does anyone know how to get the Phoenix tattoo?the option is greyed out for me
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It isn’t in a play again way.
It just continues to load the next page like it is going to continue
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Hey @NickyDicky, not sure if you are looking for feedback on typos at the moment (or if typos in this version have already been fixed for the Patreon version). If not, feel free to ignore the below. Also some of the things I’ve seen as typos may be stylistic choices so I apologise if that’s so:
Typos and bugs
*crow
*hub
*advise
Missing word “how”
Extra word “is”
*you
Extra word “an”
*yearn
*found
Either “What absurdity!” or “How absurd!”
Extra word “as”
Missing word “the”
Missing word “did”
*possess
*hadn’t
Missing word “The”
*has spanned
*right-hand’s
*boots
Missing word “you”
*spending
*pronounces
*drank
*a
Extra line break
Perhaps it’s not necessary but this is directly after the MC has shattered the mirror. Perhaps a line about them having to retrieve another mirror to continue the trial would be appropriate?
*then
*observers
I think this is meant to signify He Jun being cut off, but I think in this situation you would generally use an ellipsis. ““But if he already has betrayed his own bloo…””
*I don’t think raffle is the word you are looking for here. Perhaps “rustle”
*Gust and draught basically mean the same thing. I think it would work better just getting rid of one of them: “An unexpected gust blows in between the two of you.”
*Is this meant to say quarter finals perhaps?
*Missing words “The Tigress”
Extra word “of”
*“you are” or “you’re”
*his
*he
Either remove the word “a” or instead “the 17th position”
Extra word “the”
*handing?
*“Red wooden” not “wooden red”
*Unnecessary word “a”
*Either “a thousand years” or “thousands of years”
*at
*hardly
*few
*ascertaining or ensuring
*time?
*“You are” or “you’re”
*“a better world for us?”
*lighting
*Missing full stop
*Either remove the and just have “normal men” or “the normal man”
*Double word
*Duplicate word
*Missing full stop
*Missing word “the”
*missing word “in”
*old and ancient mean basically the same thing. Just use one.
*down
*This sentence is a bit muddled. Usually wrinkles are shorthand indicator of kindness and warmth, not something you would say they are kind and warm despite them. I would suggest rewriting it as: “One of them is an ancient man with a lengthy white beard that reaches down to his waist with a kind, warm face covered in wrinkles, who stands at the front.”
*is
*wouldn’t
This isn’t the first time I’m hearing of it. I had already read the book in the library regarding Physiques.
This doesn’t seem to make a lot of sense? He is both sweating and not sweating at the same time? I think I get the idea that a single sequence seems effortless but he is still sweating so he must have been training for a long time. Perhaps instead: “He seems to complete the entire sequence effortlessly and yet you wonder how long he must’ve practiced as his upper body glisten underneath the sunlight?”
*row after row
*Either “look in Hao Fan’s eyes” or “look on Hao Fan’s face”
*seat
*guy
*Unnecessary capitalization
*“One of her victims became a muscular man” sounds strange and backwards. I would instead suggest “A muscular man that towered over others by at least a head almost immediately became her first victim.”
*hair
*weapons;
*Missing word “that”
*Full stop instead of colon
*Tigress’
*inaccessible
*Add extra line break
*Add full stop
*These are all statements made by someone so need quotation marks
*you
*Extra word “his”
*spring
*Space needed
*I’m not sure what word you are looking for here, but I don’t think it is decadence. I wouldn’t describe a ramshackle hut as decadent.
*descent
*I would probably just say “dark brown” instead of “darkishly-brown”
*to
*Unnecessary word “to”
*shoving
*given
*Missing word “body”?
*Thousand of the
*Extra word “no”
*Missing word “off”
*try
*am
*into it
*times
*Missing word “think”
*resort
*“by a not a little” sounds awkward. Maybe instead “by a not insignificant amount” instead?
*Unnecessary word “A”
*Extra space
*man
*Missing full stop
*Either “who possesses” or “possessing”
*Maybe just say “a bolt of blood red lightning”?
*ease
*gain
*look
*surely
*rhythm
*trash
*nod
*sight?
*his
*dominate or defeat
*Either “a dozen feet deep” or “dozens of feet deep”
*digs
*advance
*I think these are meant to be commas, not question marks. Probably should be “But, without strength, they matter not”
*is it
*Missing word “want”
*Duplicate word “about”
*Missing word “far”
*Unnecessary word “of”
*ever
*Still
*Unnecessary word “to”
*Unnecessary word “it”
*edge
*all out
*than
*a
*Missing word “his”
*Unnecessary word “the”
*His strike seems to
*Not sure what word you were going for here but I don’t think it’s existence. Unless the sentence was meant to be “A bright flash of white light springs into existence”
*miniscule
*Generally you wouldn’t describe a living thing as having a carcass. As it is a centipede maybe you meant “carapace”?
*purrs
*you
*has
*that’s
*let’s
*succeeded
*pursue
*Unnecessary word “in”
*Either “and a dozen servants” or “and dozens of servants”
*Missing word “the”
*Missing word “the”
*Unnecessary word “do”
*worn-down
*an
*it’s
*says
*Should be an apostrophe, not a quotation mark
*our
*non-quiet seems a strange word choice. Perhaps loud? Thundering? Intense? Although the next line says that the MC has an easy time ignoring it, so perhaps subtle works better?
*it
*for
*those
*“is already doing his best”
*him
*Issue with the variable here
*Unnecessary word “not”
*hot-headedness
*Missing word “are” or “live”
*will it
*“With surprising agility for his size”
I don’t think this section is meant to be in italics
*“One such rule”
*arms
*Unnecessary word “but”
*Missing word “has”
*Unnecessary word “dozens”
*Unnecessary word “a”
*our
*Missing word “have”
*caution
*them
*Unnecessary word “the”
*application
*by
*Lushu’s gender changes. Meant to be he
*snow
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I picked the Dragon Tattoo, but the Phoenix Tatto’s text imply it’s used to boost your regeneration. So I guess you would need to have that talent already.
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I suppose there are decisions that will have unforeseen consequences in the future. kill the demon queen’s son; join the clan e or accept mei’s proposal. at least for me those are the ones that will influence the most in the future. even llan Moai told me that the sect would not go against her because of me and he told me that the only way to survive was to become his disciple
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I wish there was an option to be Mei’s fiancé without changing clan, as a clever ‘Look, I’m not just gonna switch clan randomly like that but if I’m Mei’s fiancé, you’ll still have a hook on me and use it as a guarantee we can do good business in the future’ counterproposition.
It’s the usual kind of deal you see in Wuxia stories, which the ‘bad guys’ always jump on even when it’s obvious it benefit the MC more than them because they always believe that once they get their foot in the door, they already won.
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How do you get tattoos, I played through the game and never got that option
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although I wonder if leaving the son of the demon queen alive to let him exact his revenge against the E clan even though we are working for them indirectly would be a way of hurting them for everything they have done to me and my clan
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My guess is it’s probably the perverted old man we encounter in the sect 
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Has anyone ever been killed in the forest on a mission to collect flowers? because I once remember what happened to me when I failed a perception roll and it never happened to me again
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One time a long time ago yes, I remember something like it told ya “you sure you wanna?” and because I’M THE REINCARNATION OF THE GOD-EMPEROR, I said yes and died like a fool
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The author said that it was like a random event that had a 1% chance of happening
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Oh wow, thanks for pointing all of this out. I’ve saved your comment and will go through it all when I have time!
This should be fixed already, tell me if it persists.
You need regen for that.
Did it help? It’s possible I messed up a variable somewhere, but most likely a save issue since I changed how his condition was tracked.
Hehe, the whole point of that deal is to get you to switch your surname - it hasn’t been expanded upon a lot as of yet, but it’s a big taboo in this world. You basically have no way back.
Panda offers them at the end of the public demo.
Not implemented yet.
That is true. Author is evil and enjoys torturing his readers (I legit felt bad once when I got an ask from someone who died in the forest the first time they entered…)
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I already started afresh😫 with no save but thanks
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just got the same error, no idea what triggers it
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Yes, it’s working now. Another martial artist appears in their place.
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What happened! What the heck happened! Why are we so weak as a MH against that pretty boy?!
Please don’t tell we’re going to be a punching bag to everyone of higher lever.
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I really think the only reason it feels that way at the moment is because of a lack of content (it is a work in progress after all). Once things like the arena get fleshed out and we can have more than one fight there, and possibly start challenging people to personal fights as well in the arena it will flesh out just how powerful the MC is compared to the average martial artist on the mountain. Are there others that are possibly stronger right now? Sure, but it would be boring if there were no road blocks at all in your path.
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