(WIP) Path of Martial Arts: The Beginning (Dark, Eastern Fantasy | 750k words)

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Since it was her son who killed her daughter, her soul was with him. So when you killed him, you got the whole family package and now DQ has all her kids together in your wrapping and doesn’t have to worry about feeding them both. Huge savings!

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Did you meet her? just asking?

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Meanwhile I just want her heart blood :roll_eyes:

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How can mc get adopted by demon queen ?

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Kill her son during the Three Chicken Inn mission.

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my mc


enjoyed the WIP, keep up the great work :man_dancing:

ignore the toe like, disfigured discombobulated fingers :skull:

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So your mc is guts from berserk but in a wuxia setting? Nice
i like it. :smiley:

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Update 0.13

Size: 350k → 372k

  • Master Events for Aiguo (massive, 10k words), Bohai (big, ~5k), MG (medium), Rin (…)

  • Caihong Event (4k)

  • LC convo after LC/Mei event

  • Ai interaction after waking up from the coma.

ALSO: there have been a lot of suggestions, some of which I found very, very good. Next update I’ll entirely dedicate to implementing them, plus fixing / adding small stuff all over the game.

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Boosty update is out as well, currently 2 versions ahead (+35k words).

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Hey are there certain choices require for long Chen and Ai event ? Because I did not get them

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for LC u have to tell him about the bomb

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At the end of the expedition, I can ask Xiwen about the strange Martial Art he used but we didn’t fight Long Chen cause I gave up.

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Not mentioned in the update notes: Xiwen went through quite a personality change. My MC is kinda heartbroken, getting him flustered was her favorite sport.

(okay, not really heartbroken, he’s still fun. But it is quite a change :V

Also, Jing Guo no longer tries to rip us out of profits he’s earned while we’re taking a nap. And Long Chen has some info on why he hates Jings so much. Also also, the restaurant got like, 10x more profitable. Guo must’ve either found better wine or more attractive waitresses.

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Speaking of ideas, i note that after the time skip Ai can now update her opinion of the MC if their kindness falls below certain point, but then maybe the opposite could be introduced – that is, Ai acknowledging MC is actually a decent person if their kindness is above certain threshold? Because right now she’ll just ignore it and won’t interact if they aren’t on good terms already. Unless of course she’s intentionally written to be someone who’s only eager to condemn others from the height of her high horse.

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Me calling her out on supporting LC when he kills Jing while being evil morally non conforming

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"Xiao ${name}, did Bei Bei give you a lot of trouble?" -- the elder says, scratching his cheek -- "I apologize on her behalf, haha."	

Is “Xiao” some sort of a title in addition to a surname, or is Chu Aiguo senile to the point they can’t remember the name of their own student…?

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Yes… Xiao is ‘little’…(xiao fan means little fan)

Usually used for juniors, kids etc

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