What’s with the tba i keep seeing?
Either parts I have no ideas how to add content, I didnt have time to write or motivation.
Have been working six day weeks the last couple of weeks, and am now slowly filling them out.
For some the “I have no idea” however is really stubborn, so it takes time.
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Oh ok, thanks author. Also can I ask if there’s a content being blocked? Because I’m confuse like something were about to happen then it suddenly skip, like some nswf is gone or did I somehow choose something that block a certain content? Or maybe I’m just imaginning things. Cause there are certain Sentences that feels cut off or incomplete.
The only blocked content is one where requirements arent meant, which means it shouldnt even show up to be cut of.
So far the only nsfw content is for Astoria, Falkenflug and Chase (Astorias is the one that is cut of, cause the person helping me write that part hasnt written it yet), could you maybe let me know about them so I can check if its a bug or not?
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Heya boss, sorry gonna ramble.
Dunno if you’re aware but choosing chase to go clubing with in swan path leads to a broken mess.
Summary
After selecting chase for clubbing it goes into Sebastians introduction where you hear him and climb up and he pushes you off and then goes into chases bland(sorry not sorry) nsfw blow job scene. Chase is experienced right?
Also did the ambitious path both male and female and chases reaction afterwards was kind of like victim blaming? Idk his reaction was kind of gross if you dont choose the jump option and leave through the door. Also his end of night for that path is shockingly less protective then the punishment scene if you choose hot weather, which is weird. Scene feels very out of character for chase
Also any chance youll give us an opportunity to cross dress? Idk chase and droz seem like they’d be into seeing the mc in a low cut blouse, short skirt with lacy bra and panties with heels.
Also we need more of this type of conversation between chase and mc
Summary
Where chase asks about the mc’s lack of body hair during raven and owl paths. We need more of this.
Lastly regarding your m/m scenes 
if you need help making those spicy and more realistic and truly worthy of nsfw. I can help you if you want.
OH oh I forgot during the raven path
Summary
If you take droz and chase, marcel mentions droz being responsible for what happened 10 years ago. Does Marcel know mc died? Also does this mean Marcel knew mc before they died? Also does this mean that besides mcs past murderous behavior that Marcel has other reasons for having mc become his raven?
Yes I’m aware I’m far to curious for my own good
That whole scene, for everyone is still a mess, the only thing thats mostly finished is going to the party solo.
All of this is a WIP means its going to change, I just wanted to get a few scenes finished at least, there is going to be major rewrites, of the early stuff too, once I finish this next big update.
It will come up in a few routes, not sure how far it will go though!
Is that sarcasm? (I really dont know) Thats supposed to be foreshadowing which will be revealed when visiting Argus Interpol after the next update. (plus I know guys like that lol are 18 looks so young I ask him if he is allowed to go to the doctor alone, super embarresing)
To be honest I dont enjoy writing nsfw, aroace in real life sex repulsed too is not a great base for writing this kind of stuff but ik many people like it (you do not want to know the amount of time I had to rewrite this stuff cause I ended up just writing a discussion about random stuff). There is a reason I have someone helping me with the female ROs nsfw scenes 
so yeah if you are up to it please send help.
Marcel knows a lot, however even he doesnt know anything, he just thinks he does! He thinks Droz killed MC. No the murder done by MC is the only reason why Marcel choose MC, I still have to come up with sth explaining why the heck he waited so long to recruit MC… (another ones of those plotholes I will ignore until next update)
No, I love people therorising over my shit! I always fear I am not writing clear enough for people to pick that up.
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Not sarcasm at all, I thought it was well written 
Hurray! I approve 100%
real life femboi I can help with many things.
Hurray I love theorizing 
Ah that reminds me because of you I have starting writting my own grimdark IF. Your entirely to blame for anything bad that happens to the mc 
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Ah great! (writing about certain struggles or at least how thy are perceived with body types wasn’t planned at all, but it still got its place, tbh I think its really important)
They just need to be written 
will take so long cause I am working my ass of, much shit is coming up (might inherit a house thats a lot of work)
Would be super appriciated (I look at sex and go like “eeewwww” lol feel free to send me a dm!
I so love to hear about them!
Oh my god, you so need to tag me, I would love to read it!!
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Lol idk if I’ll use choicescript or twine but itll be on my tumblr but it might not be your thing the opening will be quiet surprising 
Sure you can benefit from my experience
Prepare yourself for all the inane theorizing.
Such is life
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Whats your tumblr? I will give you a follow!
This reads so wrong like only if you want!!
Yeah but life is now happening since beginning of the year, I barely made any progress. 
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I’ll dm you the info
I’m sure I dont know what you mean
Progress not perfection 
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Quick question I’m replaying this and I just now saw one of the options where it says "you’re body is still throbbing with pain but you still want to see marcel again) how do I get that option because I’ve never seen a marcel person😭
He is a red flag RO only avaliable in ranven volery for male MC
Ranven? I don’t see that volery anywhere
Ravens. It’s a typo.
If you wanna see Marcel select the raven volery and the white rose on day two. Youll get the option to meet Marcel during the afternoon if you select the option, hes hard to miss 
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Tyyy I replayed the routes so many times I swear I was hella confused 
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Your welcome 
sorry but how do you get the nsfw with chase? is there an option?
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Hmm i think you got to be male beyond that im not sure